dont take me away

July 12, 2010
By Mclaughlin0321 SILVER, East Palestine, Ohio
Mclaughlin0321 SILVER, East Palestine, Ohio
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She don’t know whats in store
They all are sorta poor
Since she fell of her bike
Shes seems to be sick all night
And the bruise and cut
Wont fade away
They wait in the little waiting room
At the clinic
To see what this must be
The minute tick by
As the little girl look up
At the sky
And she be gains to cry to the clouds

I don’t have a lot of money
Please let me be ok
I help out the best I can
For being only 6
Please lord don’t take me away

The nurse takes her in
Does her tests and leaves
Out side she takes to the mom
The doctor comes in
And say he aint gonna lie
That it don’t look good
But the new thing just might work.
Little danielle closes her eyes.
And whispers

I promise ill b the best little girl
You just gotta let me stay.
I promise pray
Every day
But please lord don’t take me away

They gave her month if that
Gave her he shots.
She kept her promise
I guess the lord let her stay
She smiles as she says

Thank you lord
I promise that I wont let you down
My cancers in remission
My hairs back
I love all my friend and you
But thank you lord for not
Taken my away

The author's comments:
my lil sis's frien danielle had cancer and is in remission. tht who inspired me a little 6yd old

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