Lovestruckk...oww!

July 6, 2010
By Collin13 SILVER, Eden Prairie, Minnesota
Collin13 SILVER, Eden Prairie, Minnesota
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Favorite Quote:
Go big or go home


You have the prettiest eyes

glowing light blue

long blonde hair

makes all the guys stare

who doesnt wanna be with you?


You're not too tall

im not too small

sounds perfect right?

I'll catch you if you fall

no problem at all

was it love at first sight?


You're naturally pretty

no make-up needed

from the moment we met

my expectations were exceeded


From your pretty face

to your glowing blonde hair

You're gorgeous head to toe

its almost unfair


I dont think you're cute

Cause you're honestly not

You're more beautiful than cute

and way more than hot


The author's comments:
Okay thats it! pleaseeeee comment, anyone! its my first one:)

I wrote this a while ago, hope you like it!!!

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on Aug. 10 2010 at 10:12 am
Collin13 SILVER, Eden Prairie, Minnesota
7 articles 0 photos 10 comments

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Go big or go home

Thanks for all the awww's and stuff everyone! haha i appreciate it

liljrp said...
on Aug. 2 2010 at 8:24 am
Good good haha that was some good lyrics dude 

lnvo97 GOLD said...
on Jul. 31 2010 at 9:27 pm
lnvo97 GOLD, Chicago, Illinois
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But I say unto you, Love your enemies, bless them that curse you, do good to them that hate you, and pray for them which despitefully use you, and persecute you;
Matthew 5:44

aww!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

its so cute!!!!!!!!!


on Jul. 31 2010 at 9:10 pm
kdancer454 SILVER, Lynbrook, New York
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As the heart speaks, the pencil dulls.

awee!!! this is sooo adorable!!

 


Emilia901 GOLD said...
on Jul. 31 2010 at 7:18 pm
Emilia901 GOLD, Moreno Valley, California
11 articles 4 photos 67 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Fiction reveals truths that reality obscures." Jessamyn West

Awww that was so cute and beautiful! 5 stars all the way! =^_^=

on Jul. 28 2010 at 2:13 pm
crubs33 DIAMOND, Lido Beach, New York
58 articles 3 photos 750 comments

Favorite Quote:
"The most courageous act is still to think for yourself. Aloud."- Coco Chanel
Life isn't about surviving the storm, it's about learning to dance in the rain.

This is so descriptive!!! i love it!!!! if you could please rate and comment on my work that would be great!!! thanks and ur really good!!!


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