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How can i be around you everyday, when there is nothing to say?
you shut me out, pushed me to the ground,
so there nothing to talk about

so complicated, i get to agervated
is it a yes is it a no
oh honey i wont let you go,
will you give me a clue?
do i have to fight for you

you told her that you loved her today
just kinda pushed me out of the way
so now im fighting for words,
because i dont wanna have to hurt anymore
just let me catch my breathe
oh, there's nothing left

so complicated, i get to agervated
is it a yes is it a no
oh honey i wont let you go,
will you give me a clue?
do i have to fight for you

so complicated, i get so frusutated
its so confusing,
tell me baby am i losing?
oh am i losing?



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iKissMyPen said...
Aug. 6, 2010 at 2:59 am:
Ohhh I can totally relate to this! A true 5star poem. All you need is some editing but no big changes. I adore this type of poetry!
 
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DaisyC. said...
Jul. 21, 2010 at 10:20 am:
Hmm....I guess this kind of music isn't really my thing, but if I were into it I would say that this is pretty awsome. Most of all I like that it isn't whiney, unlike most songs of this kind that I've heard. Nice work :)
 
Lostandconfused replied...
Jul. 22, 2010 at 9:38 pm :
Thanks DasiyC.
 
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