Losing

June 22, 2010
By CJbutterfly SILVER, Chattahoochee, Florida
CJbutterfly SILVER, Chattahoochee, Florida
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Favorite Quote:
\"Never let the fear of striking out keep you from playing the game\"


How can i be around you everyday, when there is nothing to say?
you shut me out, pushed me to the ground,
so there nothing to talk about

so complicated, i get to agervated
is it a yes is it a no
oh honey i wont let you go,
will you give me a clue?
do i have to fight for you

you told her that you loved her today
just kinda pushed me out of the way
so now im fighting for words,
because i dont wanna have to hurt anymore
just let me catch my breathe
oh, there's nothing left

so complicated, i get to agervated
is it a yes is it a no
oh honey i wont let you go,
will you give me a clue?
do i have to fight for you

so complicated, i get so frusutated
its so confusing,
tell me baby am i losing?
oh am i losing?


The author's comments:
All my songs are written about guys... so I will just give you intials
MRG

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on Aug. 6 2010 at 2:59 am
iKissMyPen SILVER, Portsmouth, Virginia
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Ohhh I can totally relate to this! A true 5star poem. All you need is some editing but no big changes. I adore this type of poetry!

on Jul. 22 2010 at 9:38 pm
CJbutterfly SILVER, Chattahoochee, Florida
7 articles 1 photo 30 comments

Favorite Quote:
\"Never let the fear of striking out keep you from playing the game\"

Thanks DasiyC.

DaisyC. said...
on Jul. 21 2010 at 10:20 am
DaisyC., North Bennington, Vermont
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Hmm....I guess this kind of music isn't really my thing, but if I were into it I would say that this is pretty awsome. Most of all I like that it isn't whiney, unlike most songs of this kind that I've heard. Nice work :)




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