Will She Catch Me?

June 19, 2010
By 619Justin505 BRONZE, Albuquerque, New Mexico
619Justin505 BRONZE, Albuquerque, New Mexico
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The story of his selfish lust
Led us to their broken trust
(4/4 hi hat build up)
Verse 1
I always thought to myself, how it would be
Now all I have is unsavory memories
Insecure and
Uncomfortable
That unforgettable girl.
Can’t control my emotions
So the emotions get to me
But will I see?

Chorus
This Bed is not my own
I leave this broken home
I think I’m falling harder than ever before
Why won’t I just let myself go!
This bed is not my own
Tonight, I am alone
I think I’m falling harder than ive ever seen
I look up to the stars and ask…
Will she catch me?
Verse 2
Who knew she’d help me so much
I’m longing for her touch
A Make shift therapist
And a God blessed temptress
Those unforgettable years
Can’t control my emotions
So the emotions get to me
But will I see?

Chorus
This Bed is not my own
I leave this broken home
I think I’m falling harder than ever before
Why won’t I just let myself go!
This bed is not my own
Tonight, I am alone
I think I’m falling harder than ive ever seen
I look up to the stars and ask…
Will she catch me?
Solo/ Extra verse thing (Guitar only)
I’m going to be buried in this tomb
All alone in this empty room
She doesn’t know I’m here,
I stop and I resume
I ask myself
What came over me
(Band Comes in)
What came over me, what came over me?
I shouldn’t just have turned my back
What came over me, what came over me?
Turn around and pick up the slack
What came over me,
(Acapella) WHAT CAME OVER ME!
(Guitar Solo And song riff)

Chorus
This Bed is not my own
I leave this broken home
I think I’m falling harder than ever before
Why won’t I just let myself go!
This bed is not my own
Tonight, I am alone
I think I’m falling harder than ive ever seen
I look up to the stars and ask…
(build up)
Will
She
Catch
MEEEEEEEEEEEE!


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on Jul. 23 2010 at 1:31 am
Lovebug07 PLATINUM, Topeka, Kansas
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Favorite Quote:
Laughter is a tranquilizer with no side effects. - Arnold Glasow

This is really good. I really enjoyed it. Your very talented. Id love to see wat you would have to say about my work. anyways i really got into this and would so love to actually hear it. Its a song that is one i would love to sing... Keep up the good work :)

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on Jul. 17 2010 at 10:10 am
CarolynQ GOLD, Manalapan, New Jersey
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Wow, this is powerful, and I feel it, and I love it. Don't stop you have a true talent i suggest you keep writing and I will def. check you out more, comment something of mine if you'd like I just posted slave I wouldn't mind a reader. Once again though, good job

on Jul. 15 2010 at 12:06 am
crubs33 DIAMOND, Lido Beach, New York
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Favorite Quote:
"The most courageous act is still to think for yourself. Aloud."- Coco Chanel
Life isn't about surviving the storm, it's about learning to dance in the rain.

This is really good!! i can feel the emotion!!! if you could please rate and comment my work that would be great!! thanks and u r really good dont stop!!!




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