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In a world full of change, we must endure.
But that don't mean you gotta love her.
I don't know why, It's always like this.
It's never like that when we kiss.

Yesterday, you loved me, you held me, Never wanted to lose me. You were my best friend, my boyfriend. But who are you today?

I don't want to hear the lies,
Baby look me in the eyes.
Today i know, it's our love
that dies.

But She don't need you like I do.
She don't know your secrets, I do.
She can't kiss you like I do.
She don't care about you, I do.

Yesterday, you loved me, you held me, Never wanted to lose me. You were my best friend, my boyfriend. But who are you today?

When will you see? She's not good as me.
When will you see? It should be you and me.





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Sill_Sitter11 said...
Jul. 18, 2010 at 10:44 pm
You did an excellent job with this. At first I didn't know where it was going. Poems have to flow, you know? But then towards the middle you pulled me in and I'm like..."OK, there's a future here..." Then at the end, BAM! You tied it all together so wonderfully!!! It doesn't matter that the beginning didn't matter that was kind of hazy because at the end you made it work!!!
 
writer_girlx14 replied...
Jul. 26, 2010 at 1:34 am
totally in agreement with sill sitter!
 
sky_is_womb said...
Jul. 13, 2010 at 6:12 pm
if this is true, im sorry. i can feel your anger in your words- very nice!
 
A_Dreamer said...
Jul. 12, 2010 at 6:10 pm

Did this happen to you? I'm sorry. :(

It was a very touching poem, I could sense the pain by the words you used. Good job writing this! :)

 
respecturself7 replied...
Jul. 13, 2010 at 4:36 pm

Isn't it scary how fast love can die?

good job with expression, I didn't feel cut of. I got to feel the whole of the emotions behind your words. It's something pretty much everyone has been through but few can accurately describe. You're passionate, I like that.  :)

 
respecturself7 replied...
Jul. 13, 2010 at 4:37 pm
P.S. Do u write the music to ur songs too?
 
Pitiful_Anonymous replied...
Jul. 13, 2010 at 6:00 pm

um i have a beat for most of them, but I'm musically challenged, so no real music. I have created some music on guitar hero though.

It's sad i know, but I find it quitei mpossible ot play real instruments guitar hero is the closest thing XD

 
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