if only

May 20, 2010
By xXRiaLoraineXx GOLD, Fletcher, Ohio
xXRiaLoraineXx GOLD, Fletcher, Ohio
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Favorite Quote:
Convince yourself they're cheering for you, and one day THEY WILL BE.


there was a kid,
we'll call him brad,
he was a little off beat
and wanted attention, bad,

[chorus]
we told him we hate him,
said no one cared,
if only, if only,
we had been there

when he needed us,
he got a knife,
felt we didn't care,
he took his own life,

[chorus]
we told him we hate him,
said no one cared,
what if, what if,
we had been there?

would he even
have lost his life?
would he ever
have grabbed that knife?

[bridge]
if only, if only,
amazing grace,
had shown through me,
in this place


The author's comments:
please, after you read this, if you see anyone being picked on, or if you are picking on someone yourself, MAKE IT STOP... show some love <33

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on Jun. 18 2010 at 8:20 am
bound4life4ever PLATINUM, Jamaica, New York
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Favorite Quote:
Never take life seriously. Nobody gets out alive anyway.

this is a really gud song! short... but nice. i gasped when i got to the part that he kiled himself. just ask me friend sitting nxt to me=)

on Jun. 15 2010 at 3:09 pm
xXRiaLoraineXx GOLD, Fletcher, Ohio
12 articles 0 photos 14 comments

Favorite Quote:
Convince yourself they're cheering for you, and one day THEY WILL BE.

i really like this one, but that's because its personal for me, i need to get some feedback from all of you so i can see what i did right and what i need to improve on... please comment :)


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