unnamed song

May 9, 2010
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verse;
why do we car for the trails of this world
why do place our faith in the ones around us
why seek out comfort from those who do not care
why set ourselves up for loss when we do not need to
chorus;
we've been set free for all to see
no fear nor pain no straying path
can every separate us from his love





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ZadaRox101 This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
May 30, 2010 at 8:26 pm

Why do we love the things that hurt us

Why trust those who only let us down

This is just what I got from reading this. It's very good! (feel free to use the lines if you wish :)

 
BCS248 replied...
Jul. 13, 2010 at 4:28 pm
hey thanks I finally finished it although it still doesn't have a name. I did use one of your line I hope you dont mInd 
 
ZadaRox101 This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. replied...
Jul. 13, 2010 at 7:27 pm
haha, that's ttly fine :)
 
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