My first love song

if every simple word i say can take your breathe away id say them all.
if only you can see every smile on my face it would make your heart miss a beat.
if anyone trys to come between us our love grows stronger.
we planted all the seeds to sprout a beautfil rose.

now i honestly think this is how love goes.

for the devils wrath cant even put me down.
i grabbed the devil shook him and god accepted me.
he showed me the sky and stars.
he showed me how to love.
one last thing he showed me you.
you took the broom and sweeped my broken heart in a dust pan.
the pieces just fit together like puzzle pieces.

i express my love lyrically.
but each lyric i write cant describe it.
forever my heart beats your name even as a drift off.
i close my eyes and the distantance dissapears.

the hazey clouds in my mind fade away.
the trees no longer fall in the howling wind.
the grass begins to get greener.
and earthquakes could never shake us.

lightining will never blind us.
flames will never burn us.
thunder will never make us def

my thoughts spoke out to you, when everything seemed so true





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ellyn-bo-bellyn_2014 said...
Jul. 6, 2010 at 10:54 am
Reading you work makes me want to lay down and write forever. You've inspired me!
 
frankiefall3n replied...
Jul. 6, 2010 at 10:55 am

Thank you :]

It's what I do best write soulful pieces

 
ellyn-bo-bellyn_2014 replied...
Jul. 7, 2010 at 11:01 am
That's pretty obvious! All your stuff is great!
 
frankiefall3n replied...
Jul. 7, 2010 at 11:03 am

Thank you :]

Even though sometimes I think my stuff sucks.. I guess people think otherwise.

 
ellyn-bo-bellyn_2014 replied...
Jul. 7, 2010 at 11:14 am
well. I definately think otherwise! It's so good!!! :)
 
frankiefall3n replied...
Jul. 7, 2010 at 11:52 am

I don't know how many times I can say thank you, but thank you!

I don't know why I'm not published yet haha

 
ellyn-bo-bellyn_2014 replied...
Jul. 7, 2010 at 11:56 am
haha yeah! maybe I'll write a letter...
 
frankiefall3n replied...
Jul. 7, 2010 at 6:56 pm

haha DO IT!!

I'd love you forever and ever lol

 
ellyn-bo-bellyn_2014 replied...
Jul. 8, 2010 at 10:53 am
ok. I just wrote that letter- er email. yep! yeah but you dont have to love me. It might not even make a big difference or anything. they might not even read it. :(
 
frankiefall3n replied...
Jul. 8, 2010 at 11:19 am

You're just the best haha

Did you read my new piece yet called "Growth"?

 
ellyn-bo-bellyn_2014 replied...
Jul. 8, 2010 at 11:27 am
I'll get right on that!!
 
respecturself7 said...
Jun. 14, 2010 at 5:00 am
I've read all your stuff.....amazing!  Check out my work if you can. Keep writing you have an amazing voice!
 
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