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"Falling [With God]"

April 3, 2010
By rebeldiamond1313kd GOLD, Franklin, Tennessee
rebeldiamond1313kd GOLD, Franklin, Tennessee
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Favorite Quote:
"If you look in the mirror and don't like what you see. You can find out first hand what it's like to be me!" -"The End." -My Chemical Romance


I am falling, falling, falling
But never hit the ground
And I am sinking, sinking, sinking
But I can’t make a sound
And I am crying, crying, crying
But no one seems to care
And I am dying, dying, dying
But no one’s even there.

-I am singing, singing, singing
For only you to hear
And I am holding, holding, holding
Know that I am near
And I am loving, loving, loving
It will all be okay
And I am guiding, guiding, guiding
Tomorrow’s a new day.

I am falling, falling, falling
But never hit the ground
-I’ll catch you.
And I am sinking, sinking, sinking
But I can’t make a sound
-I hear you.
And I am crying, crying, crying
But no one seems to care
-I care.
And I am dying, dying, dying
But no one’s even there.
-I’m there.

I am falling, falling, falling
-in my arms.
And I am sinking, sinking, sinking
-in my arms.
And I am crying, crying, crying
-in my arms.
And I am dying, dying, dying
-in my arms.

I am falling, falling, falling
In your arms
-in my arms.


The author's comments:
I couldn't format this the way I wanted, so it needs some explanation: It starts off with the suffering person singing. Then any sentence or phrase with a dash in front of it is God talking to that person. In the end they sing the last line together. It's a duet between a hurting person and God.

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on Jun. 2 2010 at 3:30 pm
rebeldiamond1313kd GOLD, Franklin, Tennessee
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Favorite Quote:
"If you look in the mirror and don't like what you see. You can find out first hand what it's like to be me!" -"The End." -My Chemical Romance

Thanks. Who knows why on earth I would be writting a "God song", lol, but oh well.

on Jun. 2 2010 at 3:19 pm
LaurenE. PLATINUM, Nashville, Tennessee
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Favorite Quote:
Two woods diverge in a yellow wood, and I- I took the one less traveled. And it has made all the difference. -Robert Frost

Aw I love it!

on May. 18 2010 at 4:34 pm
rebeldiamond1313kd GOLD, Franklin, Tennessee
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Favorite Quote:
"If you look in the mirror and don't like what you see. You can find out first hand what it's like to be me!" -"The End." -My Chemical Romance

good. i was worried it wouldn't.

 

i know its repetitive, but i'm just kinda proud of having written something besides a breakup song for once.


on May. 18 2010 at 4:32 pm
rebeldiamond1313kd GOLD, Franklin, Tennessee
18 articles 0 photos 143 comments

Favorite Quote:
"If you look in the mirror and don't like what you see. You can find out first hand what it's like to be me!" -"The End." -My Chemical Romance

good, i was worried it wouldnt.

 

its repetitive i know. iwas just proud to have actually written a christian song instead of another breakup song.


on May. 18 2010 at 4:31 pm
rebeldiamond1313kd GOLD, Franklin, Tennessee
18 articles 0 photos 143 comments

Favorite Quote:
"If you look in the mirror and don't like what you see. You can find out first hand what it's like to be me!" -"The End." -My Chemical Romance

ok that's good. i was worried it wouldn't.

its really repetitive i know. i was just kinda proud i actually came up with a "jesus song" instead of a breakup song, lol.


on May. 18 2010 at 4:28 pm
clumsy_one123 SILVER, Brentwood, Tennessee
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Favorite Quote:
"All daring starts from within." -Eudora Welty

yes                                 

on May. 18 2010 at 4:18 pm
rebeldiamond1313kd GOLD, Franklin, Tennessee
18 articles 0 photos 143 comments

Favorite Quote:
"If you look in the mirror and don't like what you see. You can find out first hand what it's like to be me!" -"The End." -My Chemical Romance

idk, but it kinda came to me.

 

did my explanation of it make sense? the whole 1st person, 2nd person, unison stuff?


on May. 17 2010 at 5:00 pm
clumsy_one123 SILVER, Brentwood, Tennessee
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Favorite Quote:
"All daring starts from within." -Eudora Welty

haha since when are you writing God stuff? :P