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"Falling [With God]"

I am falling, falling, falling
But never hit the ground
And I am sinking, sinking, sinking
But I can’t make a sound
And I am crying, crying, crying
But no one seems to care
And I am dying, dying, dying
But no one’s even there.

-I am singing, singing, singing
For only you to hear
And I am holding, holding, holding
Know that I am near
And I am loving, loving, loving
It will all be okay
And I am guiding, guiding, guiding
Tomorrow’s a new day.

I am falling, falling, falling
But never hit the ground
-I’ll catch you.
And I am sinking, sinking, sinking
But I can’t make a sound
-I hear you.
And I am crying, crying, crying
But no one seems to care
-I care.
And I am dying, dying, dying
But no one’s even there.
-I’m there.

I am falling, falling, falling
-in my arms.
And I am sinking, sinking, sinking
-in my arms.
And I am crying, crying, crying
-in my arms.
And I am dying, dying, dying
-in my arms.

I am falling, falling, falling
In your arms
-in my arms.



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CommonSense7 said...
Jun. 2, 2010 at 3:19 pm
Aw I love it!
 
rebeldiamond1313kd replied...
Jun. 2, 2010 at 3:30 pm
Thanks. Who knows why on earth I would be writting a "God song", lol, but oh well.
 
clumsy_one123 said...
May 17, 2010 at 5:00 pm
haha since when are you writing God stuff? :P
 
rebeldiamond1313kd replied...
May 18, 2010 at 4:18 pm

idk, but it kinda came to me.

 

did my explanation of it make sense? the whole 1st person, 2nd person, unison stuff?

 
clumsy_one123 replied...
May 18, 2010 at 4:28 pm
yes                                 
 
rebeldiamond1313kd replied...
May 18, 2010 at 4:31 pm

ok that's good. i was worried it wouldn't.

its really repetitive i know. i was just kinda proud i actually came up with a "jesus song" instead of a breakup song, lol.

 
rebeldiamond1313kd replied...
May 18, 2010 at 4:32 pm

good, i was worried it wouldnt.

 

its repetitive i know. iwas just proud to have actually written a christian song instead of another breakup song.

 
rebeldiamond1313kd replied...
May 18, 2010 at 4:34 pm

good. i was worried it wouldn't.

 

i know its repetitive, but i'm just kinda proud of having written something besides a breakup song for once.

 
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