broken city

April 20, 2010
By SunShineSparkle BRONZE, Orange, California
SunShineSparkle BRONZE, Orange, California
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Favorite Quote:
System of A Down - MIND"you need the ones you love and love the ones that you need", HYPNOTIZE"Mesmerize the simple minded Propaganda leaves us blinded", SAD STATUE"What is in us that turns a deaf ear to the cries of human suffering"


Broken city sits on a burned down hill
we wait for death to ring our doorbell
Let me take you away
Look at me tell me what do you see
I'm watching you cry!
She tastes she feels she craves for my fatality
The town on top of a hill waits for gods judgment
Let the fire fall from the sky let our children die in the midst of
Their dreams
We wait for death to ring our doorbells
Let him in
Let him in
Look at me tell me what do you see
I'm watching you die
A house sits on top of a hill
Their sits a man waiting needles Peirce his skin no worlds ever leave
his mouth
He is blind and no words leave his mouth
He cannot hear and no worlds leave his mouth
He only sits and waits as he wonders about a love he had long ago
He only sits and waits
For death to ring his doorbell
He lets him in let's death take him away
Oh no fight is made no words are exchanged he knows it's the end
Yet he still wonders about that love long ago
What happened to her
She is the one who tasted his fatality
She is the one who craved his death
Their sat the city on the burned down hill
Their sat the town on the burned down hill
Their sat the house on the burned down hill
Their sat the man and woman holding hands never looking at each other
never knowing that they were together
Waiting for death to ring their doorbell
They let him in
Death being their son he never left

The author's comments:
originally wrote this on 11/15/2009 but i want sum feed back on this so if you read this please comment.

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on May. 10 2010 at 12:05 pm
SunShineSparkle BRONZE, Orange, California
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Favorite Quote:
System of A Down - MIND"you need the ones you love and love the ones that you need", HYPNOTIZE"Mesmerize the simple minded Propaganda leaves us blinded", SAD STATUE"What is in us that turns a deaf ear to the cries of human suffering"

... :]

thanks, i luv u too.


M3risoul said...
on May. 10 2010 at 11:08 am
M3risoul, Orange, California
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Favorite Quote:
"Emptiness has darkened my eyes as I hopelessly beg for my life to end."
-Alesana

its awesome. i love your writing :)....and i love u too <3


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