Every time I look at you.

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Oh.. I wonder if he notices me... Ive been staring at him all day.

Sitting here, in the classroom.
right now, its ten till noon.
I can't wait to see those eyes.
I wonder when he'll realize?

Boy,every time i look at you,
I fall more in love with you.
There's no more time for lies,
Lets just look each other in the eyes.

Time to leave, you lockers next to mine.
On the bus your all that's on my mind.
When i sleep, Your all that i see.
But do you see what we could be?

Boy, every time i look at you,
I fall more in love with you.
There's no more time for lies,
Lets just look each other in the eyes.

You say that we're good friends,
If you only knew what's in my head.
There's no more time for lies,
Lets just look each other in the eyes.

Oh, yeah.

Boy, Every time i look at you,
I fall more in love with you.

More and more and more and more in love with you.

There's no more tie for lies,
Lets just look each other in the eyes.





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just.me_899 said...
Jul. 30, 2010 at 10:29 am
hehe i relate to this too ^^ i was SO in love with the guy next to my locker. anyway, this was beautiful!! i loved it!!! very cute, very sweet :DDD
 
writer_girlx14 said...
Jul. 26, 2010 at 1:36 am
i can totally relate to this, i find myself doing these things sometimes to a guy i like so great poem :)
 
Sill_Sitter11 said...
Jul. 18, 2010 at 10:50 pm
I like the repetitive theme going on. It made it more "flowy" if you will. And your poem told a story. Which means it had a point to it. All poems need to have a point whether for expression or story telling or whatever. You definantly showed your purpose here!!!
 
IvyVine said...
Jun. 16, 2010 at 9:26 am

Wow this is so amazing! It's a really good song! I wish I could hear it!

Oh and a idea/suggestion- after 'More and more and more and more in love' maybe add a line and alter the end to say something like:

 'wish you would wake up and catch me cause There's no more time for lies, oh when will you look in my eyes? Yeah let's just look each other in the eyes'

 

 
Joe B. said...
May 27, 2010 at 9:32 am

great flow! rhyme works fluidly, flow's great, save the 4th & 5th stanzas' ending. a few too many syllables in my opinion

 

 
brittanyelsie replied...
Jun. 16, 2010 at 8:55 am
this is the cutest thing! i love it. the flow and rhyme is terrific. definitely a future top 100 hit.
 
HeronHero said...
May 13, 2010 at 5:35 pm
This is a really beautiful piece! It's full of a lot of expression and it rhymes without seeming forced. Excellent job!:)
 
MadAsAHatter... replied...
Jun. 14, 2010 at 10:10 pm
I really like this. I can relate.
 
respecturself7 replied...
Jun. 17, 2010 at 3:33 pm
I think it's sweet. It captures the innocence of first love.
 
BabyV replied...
Jun. 18, 2010 at 6:41 pm
It's a reallly good poem/song.A good poem can relate to aleast one person, and this wraps up high school love very well.
 
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