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Sweet Dreams

March 24, 2010
By AQuietPerson SILVER, Columbus, Pennsylvania
AQuietPerson SILVER, Columbus, Pennsylvania
7 articles 10 photos 18 comments

Favorite Quote:
"You have such a unique way with words"









-Mrs. Peterson


You make me laugh the pain away
all away even though you are ashamed
just shake it all away
for
i'll take you there where are minds
make the demands
your every desire is in my all admire

ich sehe das licht ich glaube ihrer
Macht nehmen sie meine Hande we'll
finden ein neues land ihr mein
leben mein Himmel und Nacht

Sleep my sweetheart
throw you troubles down
for i'll take care of you
please
if you do one sweet thing for me
take a sweep deep breath
travel to sweet dreams
where i'm near to help you through

I see the light
i feel your might
take my hands
we'll find a new land
your my life
my sky
and light

The author's comments:
This is similar to my other piece "Maria" I rewrote it for a friend. There is german in this, the first chorus is in german the second time it's in english.

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on Jul. 25 2010 at 10:16 pm
AQuietPerson SILVER, Columbus, Pennsylvania
7 articles 10 photos 18 comments

Favorite Quote:
"You have such a unique way with words"









-Mrs. Peterson

it says the same thing as the last stanza

on Jul. 25 2010 at 10:14 pm
AQuietPerson SILVER, Columbus, Pennsylvania
7 articles 10 photos 18 comments

Favorite Quote:
"You have such a unique way with words"









-Mrs. Peterson

i love the idea of using a different language to express feelings sometimes it just means more

on Jul. 25 2010 at 10:14 pm
AQuietPerson SILVER, Columbus, Pennsylvania
7 articles 10 photos 18 comments

Favorite Quote:
"You have such a unique way with words"









-Mrs. Peterson

thank you yes i love german i plan on taking classes soon lol

on Jul. 1 2010 at 9:55 am
HeatherBee BRONZE, I Live In, Texas
1 article 0 photos 1979 comments

Favorite Quote:
Go on and try to tear me down. I will be rising from the ground, like a skyscraper

Love is louder than the pressure to be perfect

:)) very nice!! its touching and very sweet:) lol at first at the german part, i was like What?!? hahah..good job!!

EllieK. BRONZE said...
on Jun. 30 2010 at 7:24 pm
EllieK. BRONZE, Wilmette, Illinois
4 articles 0 photos 74 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Not all who wander are lost"
JRR Tolkien

"Sometimes life sucks, so suck it up"
-ME

""We succeeded in taking that picture (from deep space), and if you look a it, you see a dot. Thats here. That's home. Thats us. On it, everyone you ever heard of

THIS IS REALLY SWEET. I THOUGHT IT WAS COOL HOW THERE WERE TWO LANGUAGES. CHECK OUT SOME OF MY WORK IF YOU GET A CHANCE.

KK2013 GOLD said...
on Jun. 30 2010 at 7:24 pm
KK2013 GOLD, Solon, Ohio
10 articles 2 photos 161 comments

Favorite Quote:
Age is foolish and forgetful when it underestimates youth.-J. K. Rowling

whoa, haha, is that German? what does it say?