I've Paid in Full

March 19, 2010
By Amanda Paige PLATINUM, Kissimmee, Florida
Amanda Paige PLATINUM, Kissimmee, Florida
22 articles 1 photo 5 comments

Caution to those that try to follow me,
I'm not a curtain I won't hide your mistakes...

I'm just a memory a flash, absorbing every
time I was held down... held back.

Misleading and tactful, with poison surging through
me, as blood through your veins, opportunity is what's
approaching I've risked everything to take and you
can be sure I will...

Just left with a space where a heart used to beat,
so I guess I traded in my heart when I saw how
much it was worth, I paid the price now success
is mine...

Cage the feelings that kill me inside...
I want to win and you live to lie...

I match your decisions, I beat them at best...
But remember who I am, I became the best....

Misleading and tactful, with poison surging through
me, as blood through your veins, opportunity is what's
approaching I've risked everything to take and you
can be sure I will...

Just left with a space where a heart used to beat,
so I guess I traded in my heart when I saw how
much it was worth, I paid the price now success
is mine...



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on Apr. 5 2010 at 10:43 am
Amanda Paige PLATINUM, Kissimmee, Florida
22 articles 1 photo 5 comments
Thank You so Much!

on Apr. 5 2010 at 10:43 am
Amanda Paige PLATINUM, Kissimmee, Florida
22 articles 1 photo 5 comments

Thank You so Much...

I will check yours out :)


on Apr. 4 2010 at 7:53 pm
babigerl1194 PLATINUM, Margaretville, New York
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Favorite Quote:
wat doesnt kill you only makes you stronger

this was amazing, i gave it five stars i really feeled the emotion and such it just reaches out and connects with you, itd be much appreciated if u sent me some feedback good or bad too ;]

on Apr. 4 2010 at 3:46 pm
sharpshot1 GOLD, Del City, Oklahoma
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Favorite Quote:
"Don't cry because its over, smile because it happend" -Dr. Suess

Its incredibly well writen, seems kinda mourning, but VERY WELL! 5 STARS!! :D

sfarias2010 said...
on Apr. 2 2010 at 4:44 pm
sfarias2010, Columbus, Ohio
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I really like it


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