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I've Paid in Full

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Caution to those that try to follow me,
I'm not a curtain I won't hide your mistakes...

I'm just a memory a flash, absorbing every
time I was held down... held back.

Misleading and tactful, with poison surging through
me, as blood through your veins, opportunity is what's
approaching I've risked everything to take and you
can be sure I will...

Just left with a space where a heart used to beat,
so I guess I traded in my heart when I saw how
much it was worth, I paid the price now success
is mine...

Cage the feelings that kill me inside...
I want to win and you live to lie...

I match your decisions, I beat them at best...
But remember who I am, I became the best....

Misleading and tactful, with poison surging through
me, as blood through your veins, opportunity is what's
approaching I've risked everything to take and you
can be sure I will...

Just left with a space where a heart used to beat,
so I guess I traded in my heart when I saw how
much it was worth, I paid the price now success
is mine...





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babigerl1194 said...
Apr. 4, 2010 at 7:53 pm
this was amazing, i gave it five stars i really feeled the emotion and such it just reaches out and connects with you, itd be much appreciated if u sent me some feedback good or bad too ;]
 
Amanda P. replied...
Apr. 5, 2010 at 10:43 am

Thank You so Much...

I will check yours out :)

 
sharpshot1 said...
Apr. 4, 2010 at 3:46 pm
Its incredibly well writen, seems kinda mourning, but VERY WELL! 5 STARS!! :D
 
Amanda P. replied...
Apr. 5, 2010 at 10:43 am
Thank You so Much!
 
sfarias2010 said...
Apr. 2, 2010 at 4:44 pm
I really like it
 
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