Ocean Moon Sky

March 11, 2010
By AlexandraVasari PLATINUM, Fort Stewart, Georgia
AlexandraVasari PLATINUM, Fort Stewart, Georgia
28 articles 4 photos 174 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Writing songs is super intimate. It's a bit like getting naked"~ Gwen Stefani


Bitter freezing wind
Makes me wonder when
It will all come together
Dark sky above
My first true love
The moon is dancing in an ocean
Ocean moon sky
Makes me wonder why
Ocean moon sky 2x
As you walk in the wind
It shines it's mysterious glow on you
Ocean moon sky
makes me wonder why
Ocean moon sky
Dark sky above
My first true love
The moon is dancing in an ocean
Ocean moon sky 2x


The author's comments:
I wrote this song in December on a night where the sky looked like an ocean, and the moon sparkled in it and I was just feeling moody alright!;) <3

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on May. 15 2010 at 10:56 pm
AlexandraVasari PLATINUM, Fort Stewart, Georgia
28 articles 4 photos 174 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Writing songs is super intimate. It's a bit like getting naked"~ Gwen Stefani

thank you!:)

Sultana GOLD said...
on May. 15 2010 at 10:21 pm
Sultana GOLD, Albertson, New York
10 articles 0 photos 17 comments

This is simply loooovely.

I loved the eclectic choice in words, like you can't take it all in at one time, as if emotions and facts are rushing in at you at the same time...


on May. 12 2010 at 8:36 pm
AlexandraVasari PLATINUM, Fort Stewart, Georgia
28 articles 4 photos 174 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Writing songs is super intimate. It's a bit like getting naked"~ Gwen Stefani

yea it is, I play it on my guitar:)thanks a lot!:)

_NoAir_ BRONZE said...
on May. 12 2010 at 8:29 pm
_NoAir_ BRONZE, Toronto, Other
4 articles 1 photo 463 comments

Favorite Quote:
There are as many ways to live as there are people in this world. Each one deserves a closer look.


–Golly (Harriet The Spy)

Is this a song? It's really good! Nice job!

on May. 10 2010 at 8:18 pm
AlexandraVasari PLATINUM, Fort Stewart, Georgia
28 articles 4 photos 174 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Writing songs is super intimate. It's a bit like getting naked"~ Gwen Stefani

thanks so much!:)

on May. 7 2010 at 8:32 am
HeatherBee BRONZE, I Live In, Texas
1 article 0 photos 1985 comments

Favorite Quote:
Go on and try to tear me down. I will be rising from the ground, like a skyscraper

Love is louder than the pressure to be perfect

love it:))) it had good imagery

on May. 2 2010 at 1:26 am
AlexandraVasari PLATINUM, Fort Stewart, Georgia
28 articles 4 photos 174 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Writing songs is super intimate. It's a bit like getting naked"~ Gwen Stefani

Awww thanks so much!!! I wish you could too, but hey we're working on that!:)

on May. 2 2010 at 1:17 am
MayaElyashiv PLATINUM, Ramat Hasharon, Other
37 articles 4 photos 196 comments
Argh! I wish I could hear the music!!! And I love your metaphors!!!




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