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Bitter freezing wind
Makes me wonder when
It will all come together
Dark sky above
My first true love
The moon is dancing in an ocean
Ocean moon sky
Makes me wonder why
Ocean moon sky 2x
As you walk in the wind
It shines it's mysterious glow on you
Ocean moon sky
makes me wonder why
Ocean moon sky
Dark sky above
My first true love
The moon is dancing in an ocean
Ocean moon sky 2x





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Sultana said...
May 15, 2010 at 10:21 pm

This is simply loooovely.

I loved the eclectic choice in words, like you can't take it all in at one time, as if emotions and facts are rushing in at you at the same time...

 
HeronHero replied...
May 15, 2010 at 10:56 pm
thank you!:)
 
_Zavery said...
May 12, 2010 at 8:29 pm
Is this a song? It's really good! Nice job!
 
HeronHero replied...
May 12, 2010 at 8:36 pm
yea it is, I play it on my guitar:)thanks a lot!:)
 
jonas_chic899 said...
May 7, 2010 at 8:32 am
love it:))) it had good imagery
 
HeronHero replied...
May 10, 2010 at 8:18 pm
thanks so much!:)
 
MayaElyashiv This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
May 2, 2010 at 1:17 am
Argh! I wish I could hear the music!!! And I love your metaphors!!!
 
HeronHero replied...
May 2, 2010 at 1:26 am
Awww thanks so much!!! I wish you could too, but hey we're working on that!:)
 
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