As i Fade away

March 10, 2010
By hxcRocker DIAMOND, Haiku, Hawaii
hxcRocker DIAMOND, Haiku, Hawaii
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You said you don't care
You said it's not the same
You've said many other things
Words that scald words that maim

I know that things will never be the same
I know i will continue to fade
Fade out of you mind out of your out of your heart...away
But that doesn't change the way...No, I think i'll wait
As i fade away


The author's comments:
I wrote this as a poem but thought i could be lyrics. So tell me if you think it makes a better poem or song lyrics

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on May. 12 2011 at 12:39 pm
Mrs.Lautner GOLD, Fife Lake, Michigan
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Favorite Quote:
someone asked me if i knew you
i turned my head wiped my tears away
and said no not anymore

Gravitation isn't responsible for people falling in love.

The hottest love has the coldest ending

love it

 


on Mar. 29 2010 at 12:43 am
amicrazyorisitjusteveryoneelse PLATINUM, Kula, Hawaii
48 articles 0 photos 198 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Everything you dream is real and everything real is a dream"

better as a poem  it's a great poem and could be transformed into a song but you have to write alot more for it to be a song




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