Angels Whisper

March 2, 2010
By moose BRONZE, Fort Dodge, Iowa
moose BRONZE, Fort Dodge, Iowa
2 articles 0 photos 1 comment

Favorite Quote:
we end up regretting the things we don't try


Angels touch around us
whisper in the silence
you'll be dead soon
but we take no heed
We've got all we need
here beside us
living in this carousel
and looking to the sky
where we know paradise
all around us
Nothing is in our way
we can claim today
and the next
and each one after that
Because we know what we want and we can get it
Just gotta go for it, you say,
I'll lead the way,
and you do
I follow down those hallways
full of angels that whisper
You'll be dead soon
But I don't listen
following your footsteps
that get harder and harder to hear
as you get farther and farther away
and there is no today
and no tomorrow
I'm drowning in this sorrow
I can't breathe
and this is what dying is
being without you
and realizing my dreams
never meant a thing
when I can't reach them
and you're not here to say
It will be ok
it will never be ok
It will never be ok.


The author's comments:
I feel like I get my inspirations from music when I tune out the words and just concentrate on the music. This one I wrote when I was listening to Ludo's horror of our love.

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Lexie96 GOLD said...
on Nov. 2 2011 at 6:25 am
Lexie96 GOLD, Havana, Illinois
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Now Cinderella don't you go to sleep, it's such a bitter form of refuge, oh don't you know the kingdom's under siege, and everbody needs you. - The Killers

That was really pretty and almost hypnotic! Great work!

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on Mar. 14 2010 at 6:39 pm
sleeplessdreamer PLATINUM, Raleigh, North Carolina
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"I have always wanted to write in such a way that people say, 'I have always thought that but never found the words for it.'" -anonymous

This was absolutely great! I loved how the flow and rhythm of the poem made it so easy to read and get lost in. Great job. Check out my work!

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on Mar. 10 2010 at 2:01 pm
TheJust ELITE, Ellenton, Florida
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"I feel that a hero is somebody who will stand up for their values and what they believe in and that can take any form. People that have values and have thought them through rather than those who just do what they’re told."-Skandar Keynes

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That was absolutely amazing! I loved it!

on Mar. 9 2010 at 7:00 pm
dancewritedream SILVER, S. Dartmouth, Massachusetts
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Favorite Quote:
"Masquerading as a normal person day after day is exhausting."

omg omg omg! im ssooooooooo sorry! i just went to rate and i accidently gave u two stars wen i wanted to give u five! im sooo sorry! i truely did love it.

on Mar. 8 2010 at 9:57 pm
ZackHarmes BRONZE, Trinidad, Colorado
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I pray that my loneliness might spur you to find something good enough to live for, something great enough to die for. - Joy Begley.

I really enjoyed this B. Something straight from the heart, like your style always is. Keep 'em comin'.

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on Mar. 7 2010 at 9:10 pm
Bethani GOLD, Highlands Ranch, Colorado
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Life is perfect until you sit back and realize how boring it is without risks.

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