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Angels touch around us
whisper in the silence
you'll be dead soon
but we take no heed
We've got all we need
here beside us
living in this carousel
and looking to the sky
where we know paradise
all around us
Nothing is in our way
we can claim today
and the next
and each one after that
Because we know what we want and we can get it
Just gotta go for it, you say,
I'll lead the way,
and you do
I follow down those hallways
full of angels that whisper
You'll be dead soon
But I don't listen
following your footsteps
that get harder and harder to hear
as you get farther and farther away
and there is no today
and no tomorrow
I'm drowning in this sorrow
I can't breathe
and this is what dying is
being without you
and realizing my dreams
never meant a thing
when I can't reach them
and you're not here to say
It will be ok
it will never be ok
It will never be ok.



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Lexie96 said...
Nov. 2, 2011 at 6:25 am

That was really pretty and almost hypnotic! Great work!

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sleeplessdreamer said...
Mar. 14, 2010 at 6:39 pm
This was absolutely great! I loved how the flow and rhythm of the poem made it so easy to read and get lost in. Great job. Check out my work!
 
ZadaRox101 This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Mar. 10, 2010 at 2:01 pm
That was absolutely amazing! I loved it!
 
dancewritedream13 This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Mar. 9, 2010 at 7:00 pm
omg omg omg! im ssooooooooo sorry! i just went to rate and i accidently gave u two stars wen i wanted to give u five! im sooo sorry! i truely did love it.
 
ZackHarmes This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Mar. 8, 2010 at 9:57 pm
I really enjoyed this B. Something straight from the heart, like your style always is. Keep 'em comin'.
 
Bethani said...
Mar. 7, 2010 at 9:10 pm
I completely agree! I love this piece! keep your style up and don't stop writing! please check out my work at annoymous, highlands ranch, colorado. Some of my pieces are guardian angels, explosion, pep band, etc.
 
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