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Everything Is Over

I don't want to write these words
because I don't want to think these thoughts
but how can I not think? when it surrounds me
everywhere I go

I can't stop feeling it
the pain and the love exist
And such little time ago
It seems so long, long ago
I held what I loved in my hand
but it slipped through the spaces, never to come back again

Everything is over
It's done for
It's gone

Everything that is, now was
in the past
and I can't go back

Everything is over
It's done
I'm finished for the end

Everything is over
How can I relive a touch, a feeling?
It's done, done
And I can't go back

It will happen all over again
Fall apart all over again
Experience the happiness,the joy,
then the love,
followed by pain
here to choke me down
again...

It will happen all over again
all over again
The same thing, the same thing
But I'm better off in the end

How can you tell me I'm better now? than before
Everything in pieces on the ground
How can you tell me I'm better now? than before
Better now, now broken
on the floor

I get what I want but I never wanted this
I get what I want but I never wanted this
I get what I want but I never wanted this




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Grasshopper007 said...
Apr. 26, 2010 at 4:10 pm:

What inspired you to write something so deep? <<J'aime il.>>

(Je suis francais)  :)

 
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highwayman said...
Apr. 26, 2010 at 1:01 pm:
I like this
 
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Moonbeam13 said...
Mar. 17, 2010 at 1:34 pm:
This was so wondeful, i feel the smae way. See life is better, when u stumble on to random poems.
 
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Emily:) said...
Mar. 16, 2010 at 7:17 pm:
That's exactly how I feel. So easy to relate to. CONGRATULATIONS ON BEING AMAZING!!!
 
buxbaum replied...
Mar. 16, 2010 at 11:15 pm :
thank you sooo much!
 
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PrettyGirl said...
Mar. 15, 2010 at 8:36 pm:
I loved the way you put so much emotion to it, and its unable to judge. When you write I feel like I've been in your shoes feeling what you feel. This is great, i love it. Your a great writer.
 
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DICMAYELIS said...
Mar. 15, 2010 at 7:47 pm:
wow your an amazing writer
 
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Taylor-pop said...
Mar. 14, 2010 at 10:43 pm:
Wow that was beatiful and if this was a song it would be amazing. your writting sounds like you put all your feelings in it x really good job i think your a beautiful writter.
 
buxbaum replied...
Mar. 15, 2010 at 1:21 am :
thank you soo much! yes i do put a lot of my feelings and emotions into my writing
 
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citylightsgirl93 said...
Mar. 14, 2010 at 8:36 pm:
very true and honest! keep up the excellent work. check out some of my work
 
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MorningStar15 This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Mar. 13, 2010 at 9:40 pm:
i love these lyrics great job they make an awesome song, honestly.
 
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katielynn21 said...
Mar. 12, 2010 at 2:43 pm:
I completely relate to these lyrics.
no matter how much you want to go back, and no matter how much you wish you could rewind time or take things back you can't. Hey, check out some of my work sometime.
 
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kujo96 said...
Mar. 12, 2010 at 1:56 pm:
VERY DEPRESSING I LOVE IT ITS KINDA WAT IM ALL ABOUT
 
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CoolBreeze This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Mar. 11, 2010 at 7:35 pm:
Wow such powerful emotions.It has so much meaning. I can relate
 
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Meliskerx3 said...
Mar. 11, 2010 at 5:19 pm:
This is beautiful, and right now, I can relate to it. I love poetry like this because it's simple, but it holds such strong emotion.
 
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purplechoc said...
Mar. 10, 2010 at 6:55 pm:
it has such a terrible beauty to use an overly used phrase
 
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Julia R. said...
Mar. 10, 2010 at 4:54 pm:
Depressingly beautiful, or beautifully depressing?
Really, though, it was lovely. And so true.
(:
 
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Milo! said...
Mar. 10, 2010 at 4:03 pm:
I really love this. I really like how everyone can relate to this. I hope you keep writing, because this is great. You should check out some of my stuff. I think you would like it.
 
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Escaped said...
Mar. 10, 2010 at 12:49 pm:
Awee :/ I love it.
 
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kianamarie said...
Mar. 8, 2010 at 7:58 am:
aw this poem is great i like it alot
 
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