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Everything Is Over

March 6, 2010
By baumshell DIAMOND, Burbank, California
baumshell DIAMOND, Burbank, California
68 articles 0 photos 23 comments

Favorite Quote:
"I was thinking how nothing lasts and what a shame that is."-Benjamin Button


I don't want to write these words
because I don't want to think these thoughts
but how can I not think? when it surrounds me
everywhere I go

I can't stop feeling it
the pain and the love exist
And such little time ago
It seems so long, long ago
I held what I loved in my hand
but it slipped through the spaces, never to come back again

Everything is over
It's done for
It's gone

Everything that is, now was
in the past
and I can't go back

Everything is over
It's done
I'm finished for the end

Everything is over
How can I relive a touch, a feeling?
It's done, done
And I can't go back

It will happen all over again
Fall apart all over again
Experience the happiness,the joy,
then the love,
followed by pain
here to choke me down
again...

It will happen all over again
all over again
The same thing, the same thing
But I'm better off in the end

How can you tell me I'm better now? than before
Everything in pieces on the ground
How can you tell me I'm better now? than before
Better now, now broken
on the floor

I get what I want but I never wanted this
I get what I want but I never wanted this
I get what I want but I never wanted this



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on Apr. 26 2010 at 4:10 pm
Grasshopper007 GOLD, Hamilton, Other
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What inspired you to write something so deep? <<J'aime il.>>

(Je suis francais)  :)


on Apr. 26 2010 at 1:01 pm
highwayman BRONZE, Curtice, Ohio
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I like this

on Mar. 17 2010 at 1:34 pm
Dunkelheitstieg BRONZE, Baldwin, Florida
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Favorite Quote:
"The poet ranks far below the painter in the representation of visible things, and far below the musician in that of invisible things. Why does the eye see a thing more clearly in dreams than the imagination when awake?,"Leonardo da Vinci.

This was so wondeful, i feel the smae way. See life is better, when u stumble on to random poems.

on Mar. 16 2010 at 11:15 pm
baumshell DIAMOND, Burbank, California
68 articles 0 photos 23 comments

Favorite Quote:
"I was thinking how nothing lasts and what a shame that is."-Benjamin Button

thank you sooo much!

Emily:) said...
on Mar. 16 2010 at 7:17 pm
That's exactly how I feel. So easy to relate to. CONGRATULATIONS ON BEING AMAZING!!!

on Mar. 15 2010 at 8:36 pm
PrettyGirl BRONZE, Brooklyn, New York
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Favorite Quote:
"True Love Never Fails."

I loved the way you put so much emotion to it, and its unable to judge. When you write I feel like I've been in your shoes feeling what you feel. This is great, i love it. Your a great writer.

on Mar. 15 2010 at 7:47 pm
DICMAYELIS BRONZE, LAWRENCE, Massachusetts
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Favorite Quote:
I WROTE THIS ONE MYSELF IS LIFE IS OKAY TO FALL THE TRICK IS IN STANDING BACK UP WITH STRENGH AND CONFIDENCE BY:DICMAYELIS DELOSREYES

wow your an amazing writer

on Mar. 15 2010 at 1:21 am
baumshell DIAMOND, Burbank, California
68 articles 0 photos 23 comments

Favorite Quote:
"I was thinking how nothing lasts and what a shame that is."-Benjamin Button

thank you soo much! yes i do put a lot of my feelings and emotions into my writing

on Mar. 14 2010 at 10:43 pm
Taylor-pop SILVER, Mole Creek, Other
5 articles 0 photos 23 comments

Favorite Quote:
Real friends are like diamonds true and rare.
Fake friends are like autumn leaves found everywhere.

Wow that was beatiful and if this was a song it would be amazing. your writting sounds like you put all your feelings in it x really good job i think your a beautiful writter.

on Mar. 14 2010 at 8:36 pm
AlyssaFama SILVER, Kunkletown, Pennsylvania
5 articles 0 photos 60 comments

Favorite Quote:
Most people want to be the sun that brightens your day. I'd rather be the moon that shines down on you in your darkest hour.

very true and honest! keep up the excellent work. check out some of my work

on Mar. 13 2010 at 9:40 pm
MorningStar15 DIAMOND, Orange, Vermont
71 articles 2 photos 179 comments
i love these lyrics great job they make an awesome song, honestly.

on Mar. 12 2010 at 2:43 pm
katielynn21 DIAMOND, Sierra Vista, Arizona
63 articles 0 photos 32 comments

Favorite Quote:
live as if you'll die tomorrow, dream as if you'll live forever

I completely relate to these lyrics.

no matter how much you want to go back, and no matter how much you wish you could rewind time or take things back you can't. Hey, check out some of my work sometime.

kujo96 BRONZE said...
on Mar. 12 2010 at 1:56 pm
kujo96 BRONZE, Dothan, Alabama
4 articles 0 photos 13 comments

Favorite Quote:
MY DEATH IS YOUR GAIN

VERY DEPRESSING I LOVE IT ITS KINDA WAT IM ALL ABOUT

on Mar. 11 2010 at 7:35 pm
CoolBreeze PLATINUM, Winnemucca, Nevada
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Favorite Quote:
The fear of death follows from the fear of life. A man who lives fully is prepared to die at any time. ~Mark Twain

Wow such powerful emotions.It has so much meaning. I can relate

on Mar. 11 2010 at 5:19 pm
Meliskerx3 SILVER, Norwalk, Connecticut
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This is beautiful, and right now, I can relate to it. I love poetry like this because it's simple, but it holds such strong emotion.

on Mar. 10 2010 at 6:55 pm
secrets_of_silence GOLD, Gisborne, Other
12 articles 0 photos 439 comments

Favorite Quote:
life had i loved the more
had it but passed away
as quietly as the day
ebbs from the darkening star.


-emanuel litvinoff

it has such a terrible beauty to use an overly used phrase

on Mar. 10 2010 at 4:54 pm
ChristianCowgirlCC SILVER, Wellington, Kansas
6 articles 2 photos 24 comments

Favorite Quote:
Galatians 1:10
"Am I now trying to win the approval of men, or of God? Or am I trying to please men? If I were still trying to please men, I would not be a servant of Christ."

Depressingly beautiful, or beautifully depressing?

Really, though, it was lovely. And so true.

(:

Milo! said...
on Mar. 10 2010 at 4:03 pm
I really love this. I really like how everyone can relate to this. I hope you keep writing, because this is great. You should check out some of my stuff. I think you would like it.

Escaped GOLD said...
on Mar. 10 2010 at 12:49 pm
Escaped GOLD, Litchfield, Illinois
19 articles 0 photos 32 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Lets go make daisy chains in the grass, but only if its 74 degrees or above. I would like to fall in love with you." (:

Awee :/ I love it.

babigerl1194 said...
on Mar. 8 2010 at 8:44 am
i agreee i t was amazing and i can totally relate