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Everything Is Over

I don't want to write these words
because I don't want to think these thoughts
but how can I not think? when it surrounds me
everywhere I go

I can't stop feeling it
the pain and the love exist
And such little time ago
It seems so long, long ago
I held what I loved in my hand
but it slipped through the spaces, never to come back again

Everything is over
It's done for
It's gone

Everything that is, now was
in the past
and I can't go back

Everything is over
It's done
I'm finished for the end

Everything is over
How can I relive a touch, a feeling?
It's done, done
And I can't go back

It will happen all over again
Fall apart all over again
Experience the happiness,the joy,
then the love,
followed by pain
here to choke me down
again...

It will happen all over again
all over again
The same thing, the same thing
But I'm better off in the end

How can you tell me I'm better now? than before
Everything in pieces on the ground
How can you tell me I'm better now? than before
Better now, now broken
on the floor

I get what I want but I never wanted this
I get what I want but I never wanted this
I get what I want but I never wanted this



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jettabugThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Nov. 5, 2012 at 6:27 pm:
Wow, that's gorgeous. It's so meaningful and really touched my heart. Great job!
 
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DaleTheWhale said...
May 13, 2012 at 9:21 pm:
Really liked it. Check out my song Too Much To Ask For, comment and rate please :)
 
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bbras97 said...
Sept. 14, 2011 at 4:49 pm:
I think you did a good job but when I read it I could see it happen but I couldn't really feel the emotion like other writers do with there work. I hope you practice alot. No hard feelings, just an honest opinion. (:
 
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writerfreak21231This teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. said...
Aug. 23, 2011 at 1:17 pm:
nightstalker part three, four, and five is now out! Go check it out if you liked the first and second! :)(:
 
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talkingcupcake said...
Jun. 18, 2011 at 11:03 am:
i love it and please can some one check my stuff its called come on baby
 
tevoRocks replied...
Sept. 14, 2011 at 5:32 pm :
i agree T.C. can you reply please i get lonely
 
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RC_of_emotions said...
May 27, 2011 at 4:50 pm:
Loved this! I can relate in a small way
 
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shunshiine7 said...
May 27, 2011 at 11:08 am:
i really enjoyed reading this poem very touching. i love it.
 
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TeenageParadise_114 said...
Mar. 23, 2011 at 8:54 am:
perfectly written (: love this poem and can't stop reading it
 
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MissAnthrope said...
Mar. 22, 2011 at 1:10 pm:
It flows beautifully, definitey one of my favourite song lyrics I've read on here :)
 
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Angel1234 said...
Feb. 28, 2011 at 12:51 pm:
LOVE this song! you should keep going. Its beautifly written
 
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Kelcey123 said...
Feb. 28, 2011 at 9:16 am:
I love that I can relate to this. This piece is very moving, it's great.
 
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LearningToFall said...
Feb. 28, 2011 at 12:34 am:

What was it you never wanted? Because this is a song I could sing to myself over and over again... If only I knew the tune.

This is beautiful - Keep Writing More!! :)

 
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Jessss said...
Feb. 6, 2011 at 2:14 pm:
I don't want to write these words because I don't want to think these thoughts- favorite line. :)
 
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dreamer9492 said...
Jan. 15, 2011 at 3:42 pm:
this is really good! i could hear this on the radio someday =) please comment or rate my stuff. thanks! =)
 
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jojo8 said...
Nov. 10, 2010 at 10:54 am:
that is a really good song i loved it nice job
 
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Ians_Lover said...
Sept. 5, 2010 at 1:49 am:
I love how this can be taken in so many different ways. It's very well written and your use of words is impressive :) good work
 
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mvanzuylen said...
Aug. 14, 2010 at 5:59 pm:
WOW i really love this!
 
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Danica said...
Jul. 23, 2010 at 2:33 pm:
This was great; really powerful.  I can totally hear music with it :)
 
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Julia. said...
Jun. 9, 2010 at 10:20 am:
i really love the end of it... kind of reminds me of paramore. it's quite deep, great to relate to. good work!
 
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