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Betrayed

February 1, 2010
By MayaElyashiv PLATINUM, Ramat Hasharon, Other
MayaElyashiv PLATINUM, Ramat Hasharon, Other
37 articles 4 photos 196 comments

(Chorus)
Betrayed

Just when I needed you most
Betrayed

Satan used you as his host
Betrayed

To think that I used to boast
Betrayed

That you’d be there for me…

But now I’m making you see

(end chorus)

No more
I’ve lost all trust in you
You left me broken inside, n’ you had no clue
Yeah, I’m still sore; not just a muscle you tore

Did you think that I’d forgive you
That I’d make it easy
When just the thought of what you do
Makes the blackest heart queasy

I’m not coming back to you
You said it was just one time
But the moon is never blue
The moon doesn’t shine

[is it pretentious to say
That I was your sun
I held your real darkness at bay
While my light fooled everyone]

I depended on you
Thought that your word was true

You always have to prove me wrong
Surprised you waited for so long

You cut my feet out from under
But there’s no lightning to your thunder

Now I see just how huge
My blunder was

You betrayed me
You’ve slayed me


Betrayed

(chorus)



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on Jun. 29 2010 at 10:03 am
MayaElyashiv PLATINUM, Ramat Hasharon, Other
37 articles 4 photos 196 comments
Thank you :)

on Jun. 29 2010 at 10:00 am
roxymutt BRONZE, Marietta, Georgia
4 articles 5 photos 110 comments

Favorite Quote:
It's not what you look at that matters, it's what you see. -David Henry Thoreau

this was SO full of emotion! you wrote this from the heart i can tell...it said so much in so few words i loved it...the end "you betrayed me you've slayed me" put everything into a kind of mystic feel...its a slaying of the heart and mind i loved it

on May. 2 2010 at 11:33 am
AlexandraVasari PLATINUM, Fort Stewart, Georgia
28 articles 4 photos 174 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Writing songs is super intimate. It's a bit like getting naked"~ Gwen Stefani

Don't be sad, it actually helps to read this, and know that it's not only happening to me. Thanks for sharing your writting:)

on May. 2 2010 at 1:32 am
MayaElyashiv PLATINUM, Ramat Hasharon, Other
37 articles 4 photos 196 comments
I don't know if to be sad or happy...happy that it moves you or sad that your going through a tough time

on May. 2 2010 at 1:06 am
AlexandraVasari PLATINUM, Fort Stewart, Georgia
28 articles 4 photos 174 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Writing songs is super intimate. It's a bit like getting naked"~ Gwen Stefani

Wow this is really great! I'm going through similar feelings right now so it really does move me.

on May. 1 2010 at 1:37 pm
MayaElyashiv PLATINUM, Ramat Hasharon, Other
37 articles 4 photos 196 comments
I'm glad I managed to convey the anger...I wrote this after a very hard episode. 

SandyC SILVER said...
on May. 1 2010 at 1:11 pm
SandyC SILVER, Concord, Other
5 articles 0 photos 78 comments

Favorite Quote:
"In the end it won't matter how many breaths you took, but how many moments took your breath away"

awesome..simply awesome...very moving.... it tells a story ,and yu convey your emotions extremely well, i was feeling angry for you!.....this would be a song that i listen to:)

Haggai said...
on Feb. 19 2010 at 5:21 am
Maya, read some of your pieces. Liked pretty much all, but this is the one that moved me most. Thanks. Haggai.


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