you left my side

January 30, 2010
By mikki23456 BRONZE, Edmonton, Other
mikki23456 BRONZE, Edmonton, Other
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one day the storm comes in
it takes you away
my side
my side gets cold
it freezes up
along with
my heart
you say
it was my fault
ii drove you to leave me
it drove you to go away
i say
come back come back
i want you with me
i want my heart to be unfrozen
if not i can leave to
i can find my own way

The author's comments:
this piece is specifacilly about my bf who broke my heart on new years

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Milo! said...
on Mar. 12 2010 at 9:06 pm
I really love this. I really like how everyone can relate to this. I hope you keep writing, because this is great. You should check out some of my stuff. I think you would like it.


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