Destiny?

January 21, 2010
By MayaElyashiv PLATINUM, Ramat Hasharon, Other
MayaElyashiv PLATINUM, Ramat Hasharon, Other
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I
look back on what I was
and

I
year for it because
I'm

Just an echo of me
now

Just a sketch of
What I want to be

So I
close my eyes and pretend
that

I'm stepping up to bat
and

I see the ball

And I'm
hopin' that I won't let it fall

And then I
recognize
that

through my eyes
I'll

Never get to see that ball
when it doesn't
fall

And so I
ask the question
Can fate deal with an
intervention

Can I
make a change
In what was written
before we came?

Can I change my destiny?

Can I re-mold
me?



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on May. 2 2010 at 1:31 am
MayaElyashiv PLATINUM, Ramat Hasharon, Other
37 articles 4 photos 196 comments
Thanks! lol

on May. 2 2010 at 1:29 am
AlexandraVasari PLATINUM, Fort Stewart, Georgia
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Favorite Quote:
"Writing songs is super intimate. It's a bit like getting naked"~ Gwen Stefani

This is also really good:) and no worries we all make typos sometimes!

on Feb. 1 2010 at 9:08 am
MayaElyashiv PLATINUM, Ramat Hasharon, Other
37 articles 4 photos 196 comments
I found a typo...oops.

Second verse, Second line, First word: it should be 'yearn', not year.


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