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I
look back on what I was
and

I
year for it because
I'm

Just an echo of me
now

Just a sketch of
What I want to be

So I
close my eyes and pretend
that

I'm stepping up to bat
and

I see the ball

And I'm
hopin' that I won't let it fall

And then I
recognize
that

through my eyes
I'll

Never get to see that ball
when it doesn't
fall

And so I
ask the question
Can fate deal with an
intervention

Can I
make a change
In what was written
before we came?

Can I change my destiny?

Can I re-mold
me?





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MayaElyashiv This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Feb. 1, 2010 at 9:08 am
I found a typo...oops.
Second verse, Second line, First word: it should be 'yearn', not year.
 
HeronHero replied...
May 2, 2010 at 1:29 am
This is also really good:) and no worries we all make typos sometimes!
 
MayaElyashiv This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. replied...
May 2, 2010 at 1:31 am
Thanks! lol
 
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