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Love All Wrong

This so-called love you picture
Just isn't right so get your
Thoughts all back in line.
Love's not a one-way thing,
Not just a song you sing.
If you don't change I will be fine.

Love can be amazing and
It's not just day dreaming.
If it's true it just might last.
Love can be a warm spring rain,
Love can be worth all the pain.
But if you stay the same I must move on,
'Cause you've got love all wrong.

You say you have no wings
But I think that other things
Are keeping you on the ground.
You think love's just for looks,
And love's only found in books.
These aren't things that I have found.

Love can be amazing and
It's not just day dreaming.
If it's strong it just might last.
Love can be a simple song,
Makes me want to sing along.
But if you stay I must move on,
'Cause you've got love all wrong.



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rebeldiamond1313kd said...
Jan. 27, 2010 at 5:47 pm:
Yay this is the one I really like. I was rereading it today in your notebook at lunch. It's very good.
In my songs I can specifically point to who or what inspired my song, like "It Doesn't Matter" was inspired by Dagan, and "Meant To Be" by Daniel..
Who or what are you thinking of when you write your songs? Like this one in particular? or would you rather me not know?..
 
clumsy_one123 replied...
Jan. 27, 2010 at 6:03 pm :
haha you like this one b/c its more than 7 lines :)
i really have no inspiration for my songs. except maybe my wishing...
 
rebeldiamond1313kd replied...
Jan. 31, 2010 at 7:42 am :
aw. That's kinda sad.
Maybe you could write a song about Your Daniel. Not a love song maybe, but just something. idk.
 
clumsy_one123 replied...
Jan. 31, 2010 at 11:11 am :
sad that i have wishes???
no.
 
rebeldiamond1313kd replied...
Feb. 1, 2010 at 5:04 pm :
Oh.. no, I guess not. I just always kinda assume wishes are sad things. idk why.
 
clumsy_one123 replied...
Feb. 2, 2010 at 10:40 am :
why do wishes have to be sad???!!!
 
rebeldiamond1313kd replied...
Feb. 3, 2010 at 5:23 pm :
Because you're longing for something you don't have. What's NOT sad about that??
 
clumsy_one123 replied...
Feb. 3, 2010 at 5:33 pm :
idk... whats even more sad is when people say wishing is sad. haHA!
 
rebeldiamond1313kd replied...
Feb. 8, 2010 at 3:56 pm :
lol. touchee.
 
clumsy_one123 replied...
Feb. 8, 2010 at 4:13 pm :
i believe it's "touche" with an accent on the "e". haha you spelled "touch-eeee"
lol
 
rebeldiamond1313kd replied...
Feb. 12, 2010 at 4:59 pm :
I know there's an accent. But idk how to do the accent on here, so I added an extra 'e' so you would know i didnt mean 'touch' or 'touchy'
 
clumsy_one123 replied...
Feb. 12, 2010 at 5:57 pm :
so you created the loveley word touchee
 
rebeldiamond1313kd replied...
Feb. 13, 2010 at 4:21 pm :
yes. it should be added to the dictionary now.
 
clumsy_one123 replied...
Feb. 14, 2010 at 8:54 am :
what does it mean?
 
rebeldiamond1313kd replied...
Feb. 15, 2010 at 10:05 am :
umm. the same thing as touche with an accent, but its a different way of spelling it if you have no accent. like on here..
 
clumsy_one123 replied...
Feb. 15, 2010 at 11:02 am :
psh thats not very creative
 
rebeldiamond1313kd replied...
Feb. 15, 2010 at 11:24 am :
Well excuse me if I can;t come up with as good words as "Japina" and "Chapanese" lol.
 
clumsy_one123 replied...
Feb. 15, 2010 at 5:51 pm :
LOL :D
that was funny, you have to admit :P
 
rebeldiamond1313kd replied...
Feb. 16, 2010 at 10:46 am :
That was hilarous. and no one else got it either, which kinda made it funnier. :P
 
clumsy_one123 replied...
Feb. 16, 2010 at 12:07 pm :
the funniest part was u were like "chapan" and "japchinesse". you like did it the hard way :P
 
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