December 16, 2009
By sasssgirrrl22 PLATINUM, Pearl River, New York
sasssgirrrl22 PLATINUM, Pearl River, New York
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Favorite Quote:
"Giving up is not a part of my vocabulary."
"Don't let the fear of striking out keep you from playing the game."
"Truth be told I miss ya, truth be told I'm lying."

This feels just like another dream;
Trapped underneath my own routines;
I try to lift it off of me;
I give up, I give up; Just sit and breathe
I'm paralyzed; I'm stuck in the middle;
Caught inside a stupid dream
Look for her, but cannot see;
I give up, I give up;
There's no time to believe;
I'm paralyzed, stuck in the middle;
The only way to cope is to realize
This feels like another dream; Everyone around ahold of me
Pulled from every side of me; I give up, I give up, there's nothin left of me;
Arms and legs in between, caught inside a stupid dream;
Look for her but cannot see;
There's no time to believe
I'm paralyzed

The author's comments:
This is about when I found out I'm petrified of deep water. I couldn't move, speak. I felt alone while people tried to talk me out of it.

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Milo! said...
on Mar. 13 2010 at 8:20 am
I really love this. I really like how everyone can relate to this. I hope you keep writing, because this is great. You should check out some of my stuff. I think you would like it.


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