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Thanks A Lot

By , Mertzon, TX
Thanks a lot for quiting early
can't you see the damage that you caused
can't you see my heart's been broken
i just wanna know what went wrong.

You drive me crazy 80 percent of the time
Im so uneasy about it
I keep replaying it in my mind
please tell me what went wrong
tell me what I didn't do right
because this drives me crazy
and I dont wanna end with a fight.

Thanks a lot for quiting early
it makes me think if you were trying to save me
from the boy you knew yo could be

You drive me crazy 80 percent of the time
Im so uneasy about it
I keep replaying it in my mind
please tell me what went wrong
tell me what I didn't do right
because this drives me crazy
and I dont wanna end with a fight.

Did she really care about you that much
to give her whole self to you
just to see you stay
I guess Jenna learned her lesson
because you still left anyways

You drive me crazy 80 percent of the time
Im so uneasy about it
I keep replaying it in my mind
please tell me what went wrong
tell me what I didn't do right
because this drives me crazy
and I dont wanna end with a fight.

thanks a lot for quiting early
it makes me think if you were trying to save me
from the boy you knew you could be.





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Daniel W. said...
Jan. 10, 2010 at 6:32 pm
This is an excellent poem! I like that you talked about your experience. Well done! 5 stars! I hope that you win this contest.
 
Randileighlove replied...
Jan. 31, 2010 at 10:09 pm
thanks.. experience tells stories best. thank you! :)
 
The~crayon~in~my~heart said...
Jan. 9, 2010 at 5:56 pm
i so sorry, but your bound to find a dirtbag once in your life~ can i call him a dirtbag? anyway, your song was wonderful i loved it
 
Randileighlove replied...
Jan. 31, 2010 at 10:08 pm
oh yeah, dirtbag, pretty much whatever you want to call him, lol. thank you so much!
 
Randileighlove said...
Jan. 3, 2010 at 10:56 pm
thanks!!! :)
 
Bethani said...
Jan. 2, 2010 at 10:15 pm
I'm so sorry! Keep living life to the fullest and I'm sure you'll find a good guy. I know how you feel. You're a great writer! Keep it up!
 
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