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That Girl

November 23, 2009
By Randileighlove SILVER, Mertzon, Texas
Randileighlove SILVER, Mertzon, Texas
9 articles 0 photos 14 comments

Favorite Quote:
Live In Love


She's that girl you see
walking down the fresh rain poured street.
with a smile on her face,
but a frown on her heart.
make-up puts on her grace
but just untill she falls apart.

You would never know it
she tries not to show it
she can only smile from the outside
her heart is black and blue
but no one can see through
she only wonders why it even beats everytime.

3 boys have broken her heart
but thats not the reason why she's living in the dark
when she goes home its just the abuse not only from herself but emotionally too.

You would never know it
she tries not to show it
she can only smile from the outside
her heart is black and blue
but no one can see through
she only wonders why it even beats everytime.

She's got a fake smile on her face.
her heart on her sleave.
learning every step of the way.
so ashamed

she's never been touched with a knife
but she puts it up to her skin just to know what it feels like
a peaceful paradise.

You would never know it
she tries not to show it
she can only smile from the outside
her heart is black and blue
but no one can see through
she only wonders why it even beats everytime.

A smile on her face
A frown on her heart
make-up puts on her grace
but just untill she falls apart


The author's comments:
umm, well i wrote guitar music to this song, and its soo pretty especially between the 2nd verse and the bridge.. but yeah I really like this song it is super special to me...

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liloxD said...
on Jan. 8 2012 at 6:35 pm
liloxD, Amman, Other
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Favorite Quote:
"ExPeCt ThE uNeXpEcTaBlE "

"if ur imagination is limited then ur life is limited as well" (true story xP )

amazingly written *_*

on Nov. 25 2011 at 6:12 pm
Randileighlove SILVER, Mertzon, Texas
9 articles 0 photos 14 comments

Favorite Quote:
Live In Love

Just search "that girl randi Leigh" and you should find it! Thanks!

on Nov. 25 2011 at 6:02 pm
harrypottergirlll SILVER, Santa Fe, New Mexico
5 articles 3 photos 4 comments

Favorite Quote:
~everthing happens for a reason~

Where is it? I would love to hear the song, very well written. I can relate, but you have heard that about soooo many times :)

on Nov. 10 2011 at 12:06 pm
Randileighlove SILVER, Mertzon, Texas
9 articles 0 photos 14 comments

Favorite Quote:
Live In Love

This song is on youtube now! :) Thanks yall!

on Nov. 10 2011 at 12:05 pm
Randileighlove SILVER, Mertzon, Texas
9 articles 0 photos 14 comments

Favorite Quote:
Live In Love

it's on there :)

on Nov. 10 2011 at 12:05 pm
Randileighlove SILVER, Mertzon, Texas
9 articles 0 photos 14 comments

Favorite Quote:
Live In Love

It's on youtube now!

on Aug. 7 2011 at 4:15 pm
xsassysydx GOLD, Boiceville, New York
18 articles 14 photos 24 comments

Favorite Quote:
“To be a star, you must shine your own light, follow your own path, and don't worry about the darkness, for that is when the stars shine brightest”

i am too!!

on Aug. 7 2011 at 4:15 pm
xsassysydx GOLD, Boiceville, New York
18 articles 14 photos 24 comments

Favorite Quote:
“To be a star, you must shine your own light, follow your own path, and don't worry about the darkness, for that is when the stars shine brightest”

this is so me, i love it

on Aug. 7 2011 at 10:03 am
maggie.ramone BRONZE, Bubblegum World, Mississippi
3 articles 0 photos 9 comments

Favorite Quote:
" Don't carry life. Let life, carry you."
- Me

i can relate to this completely. this poem was so powerful and so raw.

Amazing work ! <3

 


virgo93 BRONZE said...
on Jun. 24 2011 at 6:08 pm
virgo93 BRONZE, East Bethany, New York
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I can relate to this. Thank you for writing it because it makes people aware that there are girls out there who are suffering, who too often go unnoticed.

on Apr. 19 2011 at 10:32 am
twiztidgurl985 BRONZE, Portsmouth, New Hampshire
3 articles 3 photos 2 comments

Favorite Quote:
sometimes you have to forget how you feel and remember what you deserve.

i love this song cause i am that girl

on Mar. 28 2011 at 1:46 pm
bigdaddy14 BRONZE, Oshkosh, Wisconsin
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this song really hit me hard because i know a girl that is exactly like this, and it is truely sad that you really would never know these things unless you know the person. Great song!

Bee.xx SILVER said...
on Sep. 11 2010 at 10:33 pm
Bee.xx SILVER, Adelaide, Alaska
8 articles 0 photos 4 comments

Favorite Quote:
umm, dude, yo, oi, bro

wow! this is an amazing song! please tell me the link on youtube because I'm dyyyiiing to hear it! your a terrific song writer !!!

ELM522 DIAMOND said...
on Sep. 11 2010 at 1:36 pm
ELM522 DIAMOND, Selden, New York
79 articles 0 photos 139 comments

Favorite Quote:
"All those other girls, well they're beautiful, but would they write a song for you?"-"Hey Stephen" by Taylor Swift

It has a good message. It's also a well written song, and I bet it sounds even better on guitar. One thing I noticed was it has no bridge. However, every song-writer has a different technique, and in some songs, a bridge just won't fit. It's good, and keep up writing.

on Aug. 11 2010 at 1:39 pm
LiveLaughWrite24 BRONZE, Dublin, Ohio
1 article 0 photos 3 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Life Is 10 Percent What Happens To You And 90 Percent Of How You React To It."

Wow. This Is So On Point. You Really Captured The Essence And Soul Of A Broken Girl. Amazing.

on Jan. 31 2010 at 10:05 pm
Randileighlove SILVER, Mertzon, Texas
9 articles 0 photos 14 comments

Favorite Quote:
Live In Love

Oh my gosh! thank you so much for your feedback! that really means a lot to me. it is really special to me that other people can relate. Thank you.. It is going to be on youtube soon :)

gino92 said...
on Jan. 10 2010 at 2:47 pm
this song is beautiful. not to bring anything up but is this song very personally connected to you...when i read it, it reminded me of myself when i lost my gf of 2 years...well you should deffinately try recording it and sending out a demo...you've got something special...show it off :) goodluck

LeahGaus said...
on Jan. 7 2010 at 5:22 pm
I like this a lot. Let me know if you post it on youtube. I would LOVE the link.

on Jan. 5 2010 at 10:22 pm
Thanks! I will def consider!

on Jan. 5 2010 at 8:40 pm
sydney_hope GOLD, Round Rock, Texas
15 articles 0 photos 55 comments
You should make a youtube video of it :) Id love to hear it