Come Back

November 29, 2009
By momo94 SILVER, Pacifica, California
momo94 SILVER, Pacifica, California
6 articles 0 photos 0 comments

I've lost those I love,
too many to count.
In spirit, in death,
whats life all about?
To love and have lost's not
better at all.

Cause cold turns to spring turns to summer,
but what do you do when
you fall?
I guess your not what I thought.
I never knew you at all.
All I've felt comes into one,
these feelings swirl in my head.
Now I think that you don't care
and I'd just rather be dead
than lose you.
Don;t let my words
confuse you.
Come back to me

And when the days turn to shadows,
I see you all too clear.
And when I relive that sadness,
I let escape a tear.
But the pain doesn't get
better at all.

Cause cold turns to spring turns to summer,
but what do you do when
you fall?
I guess your not what I thought.
I never knew you at all.
All I've felt comes into one,
these feelings swirl in my head.
Now I think that you don't care
and I'd just rather be dead
than lose you.
Don't let my words
confuse you.
Come back to me

And, it's still not better
at all...

The author's comments:
At this time, I had just lost a family member. And it made me think about what I've really learned in that time.

Similar Articles

JOIN THE DISCUSSION

This article has 2 comments.


400king BRONZE said...
on Dec. 21 2009 at 11:49 am
400king BRONZE, Hemet, California
1 article 0 photos 23 comments

Favorite Quote:
a poem is never finished, just abandoned

this is a great song, i was able to get a rythm going and sing it to myself BUT i do believe you should lose the "than lose you" after "and i'd just rather be dead" it goes along much nicer but other than that, great

on Dec. 18 2009 at 12:31 pm
wanghui138138 BRONZE, Providence, Rhode Island
4 articles 0 photos 28 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Don't fear anything other than giving up."

You are very talented!


Parkland Book