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I'm falling through a tunnel
of everything I've lost.
I look at the pain I took,
parts of my heart it cost.
Though I'm still alive,
the soul will always bleed.
And I still dunno
what I really need.

The blackness surrounds
as I fall towards the ground.
Memories pass by
of all those times I've cried.
I can't really tell
if you know me as well.
But help me would you?
Cuz I need some saving too.

I hit the ground,
but I don't feel it.
I look around,
but I don't see it.
Don't see anything
but a mirror.
I approach,
the glass is clearer.
Is this me,
that I see?

The blackness surrounds
as I fall towards the ground.
Memories pass by
of all those times I've cried.
I can't really tell
if you know me as well.
But help me would you?
Cuz I need some saving too.

Someone enters the room.
I see that its you.
How did you find me?
How could you see,
past my looks and into me?
How do you wind,
up in my mind?

(softer)
The blackness surrounds
as I fall towards the ground.
Memories pass by
of all those times I've cried.
I can't really tell
if you know me as well.
But help me would you?
Cuz I need some saving too.

The black fades away,
cuz you saved me
again today





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Ashleykimiko said...
Jan. 20, 2010 at 6:50 pm
through your lyrics, you provide a very accurate description of depression. great lyrics! would love to hear these song lyrics performed as an actual song! great job!
 
Kailli said...
Dec. 22, 2009 at 6:39 pm
I really liked this, kept me interested all the way through. You've got a real talent, so stick with it. Overall, very good job:)
 
400king said...
Dec. 21, 2009 at 11:57 am
once again i love this song, you have a real gift and trust me i'm not one to go around congratulating other people on their work but you are really good. there are some tiny things you can fix though, too. like just shortening up some phrases and making them easier to sing. like "towards the ground" would be so much simpled as "to the ground." heres something easy to remember i hope that helps, keep it simple.
 
pearl♥ said...
Dec. 21, 2009 at 11:42 am
easy to relate to... nice job
 
wishing4thebest2day said...
Dec. 20, 2009 at 12:43 pm
It was so real and easy to relate to. Amazing!
 
ErosMethod said...
Dec. 15, 2009 at 9:35 pm
This is the type of stuff i'm into. Good writing.
 
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