Finding the Cure

November 29, 2009
By hbananabread93 GOLD, Lyons, Pennsylvania
hbananabread93 GOLD, Lyons, Pennsylvania
11 articles 4 photos 69 comments

Favorite Quote:
it is what it is
&&
dance like EVERYBODY is watching


My world is spinning
all out of place
so I plaster this
smile on my face

so no one can see
exactly how I feel
so no one can tell
that I can’t deal.

I can’t do this
can’t take it anymore,
I need to move on,
but I can’t find the cure.

I need to move on,
its such a stupid thing
I need to numb
this everlasting sting.

It happened so long
ago in the past
but I cannot help it
that feelings last.

I can’t do this
can’t take it anymore,
I need to move on,
but I can’t find the cure.

I need to just put it all
away, cauterize,
but it won’t last, and again
these feelings will arise.

Remembering is the worst,
and I get upset
and once again I realize,
I just can’t forget.

I can’t do this
can’t take it anymore,
I need to move on,
but I can’t find the cure.



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on Feb. 20 2010 at 11:38 am
hbananabread93 GOLD, Lyons, Pennsylvania
11 articles 4 photos 69 comments

Favorite Quote:
it is what it is
&&
dance like EVERYBODY is watching

thank you, dearest! =D

on Feb. 19 2010 at 10:13 am
lailazohra SILVER, Kutztown, Pennsylvania
7 articles 0 photos 5 comments

Favorite Quote:
-"If being an egomaniac means I believe in what I do and in my art or music, then in that respect you can call me that... I believe in what I do, and I'll say it. " -John Lennon

freaking incredible. put some music to it and you have a hit, loveyy :] <3

on Jan. 29 2010 at 11:35 am
hbananabread93 GOLD, Lyons, Pennsylvania
11 articles 4 photos 69 comments

Favorite Quote:
it is what it is
&&
dance like EVERYBODY is watching

thank you so much!!! =D

on Jan. 24 2010 at 4:19 pm
fantasyfreak294 BRONZE, Somewhere Cool, Texas
3 articles 0 photos 16 comments

Favorite Quote:
it's not what you say you do that matters, it's what you show you do.

with music I can see how this is an amzing song!

on Jan. 18 2010 at 8:55 pm
hbananabread93 GOLD, Lyons, Pennsylvania
11 articles 4 photos 69 comments

Favorite Quote:
it is what it is
&&
dance like EVERYBODY is watching

by the way, ikicksacks, i love your name... =D

on Jan. 18 2010 at 8:53 pm
hbananabread93 GOLD, Lyons, Pennsylvania
11 articles 4 photos 69 comments

Favorite Quote:
it is what it is
&&
dance like EVERYBODY is watching

aww, thanks lyna.... =D

on Jan. 18 2010 at 6:00 pm
Amazing poem :)

I really love this line too!! and the whole first stanza.

on Jan. 17 2010 at 6:29 pm
hbananabread93 GOLD, Lyons, Pennsylvania
11 articles 4 photos 69 comments

Favorite Quote:
it is what it is
&&
dance like EVERYBODY is watching

oops, i made a cyclops! lol

* =D

on Jan. 17 2010 at 6:29 pm
hbananabread93 GOLD, Lyons, Pennsylvania
11 articles 4 photos 69 comments

Favorite Quote:
it is what it is
&&
dance like EVERYBODY is watching

hahah, why thank you!! -D

on Jan. 17 2010 at 6:28 pm
that is such a great point! what an amazing line!!! i think everyone does that from time to time in their lives... i know i do

rimdncr71 said...
on Jan. 17 2010 at 6:18 pm
I think this is an amazing poem. i get the whole "so i plaster this smile on my face" thing. and i agree that its very impressive =]

on Jan. 17 2010 at 5:37 pm
hbananabread93 GOLD, Lyons, Pennsylvania
11 articles 4 photos 69 comments

Favorite Quote:
it is what it is
&&
dance like EVERYBODY is watching

thanks!!! =D

on Jan. 17 2010 at 5:34 pm
i looked at a lot of the poems on your profile (sorry for being a little creepy). instead of commenting on all of them, i just wanted to say that these are all really good!

on Jan. 17 2010 at 5:24 pm
hbananabread93 GOLD, Lyons, Pennsylvania
11 articles 4 photos 69 comments

Favorite Quote:
it is what it is
&&
dance like EVERYBODY is watching

wouldnt you like to know? ;|

on Jan. 17 2010 at 5:24 pm
actually, im wondering a little about that too. what happened that caused you to write this?

on Jan. 17 2010 at 5:14 pm
oh, i completely agree with you

ikicksacks said...
on Jan. 17 2010 at 5:10 pm
i agree. flows very nicely and makes me wonder more and more as i read through it what the event was causing all the grief.

on Jan. 17 2010 at 5:06 pm
hbananabread93 GOLD, Lyons, Pennsylvania
11 articles 4 photos 69 comments

Favorite Quote:
it is what it is
&&
dance like EVERYBODY is watching

thank you!!! you are soo nice!!!

on Jan. 17 2010 at 5:05 pm
i agree with you. compared to some other poetry on this website, this one has really good rhythm. i like it :)

on Jan. 17 2010 at 4:51 pm
I love the flow of this and all the rhythm it has. you have some amazing rhymes and overall, it is very good... impressive! keep writing =D




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