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Finding the Cure

My world is spinning
all out of place
so I plaster this
smile on my face

so no one can see
exactly how I feel
so no one can tell
that I can’t deal.

I can’t do this
can’t take it anymore,
I need to move on,
but I can’t find the cure.

I need to move on,
its such a stupid thing
I need to numb
this everlasting sting.

It happened so long
ago in the past
but I cannot help it
that feelings last.

I can’t do this
can’t take it anymore,
I need to move on,
but I can’t find the cure.

I need to just put it all
away, cauterize,
but it won’t last, and again
these feelings will arise.

Remembering is the worst,
and I get upset
and once again I realize,
I just can’t forget.

I can’t do this
can’t take it anymore,
I need to move on,
but I can’t find the cure.




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lzfx11 said...
Feb. 19, 2010 at 10:13 am:
freaking incredible. put some music to it and you have a hit, loveyy :] <3
 
hbananabread93 replied...
Feb. 20, 2010 at 11:38 am :
thank you, dearest! =D
 
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fantasyfreak294 said...
Jan. 24, 2010 at 4:19 pm:
with music I can see how this is an amzing song!
 
dncr17 replied...
Jan. 29, 2010 at 11:35 am :
thank you so much!!! =D
 
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rimdncr71 said...
Jan. 17, 2010 at 6:18 pm:
I think this is an amazing poem. i get the whole "so i plaster this smile on my face" thing. and i agree that its very impressive =]
 
lovelytonight93 replied...
Jan. 17, 2010 at 6:28 pm :
that is such a great point! what an amazing line!!! i think everyone does that from time to time in their lives... i know i do
 
hbananabread93 replied...
Jan. 17, 2010 at 6:29 pm :
hahah, why thank you!! -D
 
hbananabread93 replied...
Jan. 17, 2010 at 6:29 pm :
oops, i made a cyclops! lol
* =D
 
lynaballerina replied...
Jan. 18, 2010 at 6:00 pm :
Amazing poem :)
I really love this line too!! and the whole first stanza.
 
dncr17 replied...
Jan. 18, 2010 at 8:53 pm :
aww, thanks lyna.... =D
 
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toomanydrumsiii!!! said...
Jan. 17, 2010 at 5:34 pm:
i looked at a lot of the poems on your profile (sorry for being a little creepy). instead of commenting on all of them, i just wanted to say that these are all really good!
 
hbananabread93 replied...
Jan. 17, 2010 at 5:37 pm :
thanks!!! =D
 
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lovelytonight93 said...
Jan. 17, 2010 at 4:51 pm:
I love the flow of this and all the rhythm it has. you have some amazing rhymes and overall, it is very good... impressive! keep writing =D
 
your_best_friend43 replied...
Jan. 17, 2010 at 5:05 pm :
i agree with you. compared to some other poetry on this website, this one has really good rhythm. i like it :)
 
dncr17 replied...
Jan. 17, 2010 at 5:06 pm :
thank you!!! you are soo nice!!!
 
ikicksacks replied...
Jan. 17, 2010 at 5:10 pm :
i agree. flows very nicely and makes me wonder more and more as i read through it what the event was causing all the grief.
 
lovelytonight93 replied...
Jan. 17, 2010 at 5:14 pm :
oh, i completely agree with you
 
your_best_friend43 replied...
Jan. 17, 2010 at 5:24 pm :
actually, im wondering a little about that too. what happened that caused you to write this?
 
dncr17 replied...
Jan. 17, 2010 at 5:24 pm :
wouldnt you like to know? ;|
 
dncr17 replied...
Jan. 18, 2010 at 8:55 pm :
by the way, ikicksacks, i love your name... =D
 
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