Shock the Heart

November 8, 2009
By RobertSeabrook GOLD, Fairfax, Virginia
RobertSeabrook GOLD, Fairfax, Virginia
15 articles 1 photo 6 comments

The day you asked me out
I said yes with out a doubt
You pretended to love me
But I saw that secreat fee
This love was not true
And I could never love you
Love you
Love you

You shock the heart untill it breaks
You shock the heart and do what ever it takes
You cut my heart in two
Into pieces by you
By you
By you

I thought you were the one
Then you said that were done
Now in crying at home
Shedding tears all alone
Alone
Alone

You shock the heart untill it breaks
You shock the heart and do what ever it takes
You cut my heart in two
Into pieces by you
by you
by you

Then you came back to me
And You started to plea
But I saw you with that girl
And you get down on one knee
Am I your second choice
Will you even hear my voice
my voice
my voice

You shock the heart untill it breaks
You shock the heart and do what ever it takes
You cut my heart in two
Into pieces by you
By you
By you

You shock the heart untill it breaks


The author's comments:
My friends last name was "shock" and she inspired me to write this. I'm sure all of us have been through something like this in all of our lives.

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on Jan. 15 2010 at 8:22 pm
xXWOLFXx SILVER, Brunswick, Georgia
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Favorite Quote:
"can't you pull out if noone is else is coming?" -Brandon Bailey

Okay, so what i'm getting is that a girl led you on, right? I know that feeling, it sucks to no limit, but at least it gave you the inspiration to write such a good song about it.

on Dec. 2 2009 at 5:06 pm
RobertSeabrook GOLD, Fairfax, Virginia
15 articles 1 photo 6 comments
Haha thanks!

thatgirl_93 said...
on Dec. 2 2009 at 12:53 pm
fabulousa

:)

on Nov. 30 2009 at 7:38 pm
RobertSeabrook GOLD, Fairfax, Virginia
15 articles 1 photo 6 comments
Thank you!

MKF2 said...
on Nov. 30 2009 at 8:58 am
Beautiful!

on Nov. 27 2009 at 8:52 pm
RobertSeabrook GOLD, Fairfax, Virginia
15 articles 1 photo 6 comments
Thanks! Your so nice!

on Nov. 27 2009 at 8:51 pm
RobertSeabrook GOLD, Fairfax, Virginia
15 articles 1 photo 6 comments
Thank You!

Bethani GOLD said...
on Nov. 27 2009 at 7:09 pm
Bethani GOLD, Highlands Ranch, Colorado
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Favorite Quote:
Life is perfect until you sit back and realize how boring it is without risks.

I love these lyrics! You can describe things in a way that is easy to understand. Full of passion!

on Nov. 25 2009 at 8:27 pm
rebeldiamond1313kd GOLD, Franklin, Tennessee
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Favorite Quote:
"If you look in the mirror and don't like what you see. You can find out first hand what it's like to be me!" -"The End." -My Chemical Romance

It's good.

You're right, I think everyone has gone thru something like this, so it's good to relate to.




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