Today Gone Be Aight MAG

November 7, 2009
By Antoniow BRONZE, St. Louis, Missouri
Antoniow BRONZE, St. Louis, Missouri
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Today gone be just fine
I proly hit the lottery, they proly envy me
I proly win a sweepstakes and go on a shopping spree
I proly get a brand new T.I.P. CD, for free
I proly fool around and have kids looking up to me
I'm gone have a good day, and I don't even have to have fancy jewelry
Today gone be alright, I feel on top of the world
Today I ain't having no problems with girls

Today gone be just fine
I'm gone have myself a ball
Today gone be aight
I'm gone conquer the world

Today gone be just fine
I ain't having no problems with girls
Today gone be aight
I'm not gone have to fight

I'm a lids kid bout some new hats
don't call me materialistic for that
I just like to put things on my head
I picked up my pad and put some lead on the page
Writing songs is what I do
Today I just decided to give one to you
And I'm Feeling Fine, Do whatever I want to do today
that's just my state of mind

Today gone be just fine
I'm gone have myself a ball
Today gone be aight
I'm gone conquer the world

Today gone be just fine
I ain't having no problems with girls
Today gone be aight
I'm not gone have to fight

I'm feeling great, Everything straight
So relaxed I can hear myself blink
Nothing but time all I can do is think
Happiness is all I can feel
My peace today ain't nobody gone still
If there's a will there's a way,
but there ain't no way you can steal my peace today
Today gone be great
If you ever felt this way, then you proly can relate


The author's comments:
I am Antonio. I plan to become a hip hop artist and a poet. I wrote this peice of Art, Because sometimes I just want to get away from the world for a while and have complete silence.

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on Mar. 5 at 5:28 pm
AinsleyTurnedAlex PLATINUM, San Diego, California
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yeah bro dis pretty good keep on writin man

on Mar. 8 2013 at 11:56 am
4evameme BRONZE, Portsmouth, Virginia
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Favorite Quote:
it aint disrespect if you telln the truth

wow your woeds is what i should have been sayn to start my mornings off like its amazing those words just reading them brings a smile to my face

on Mar. 8 2013 at 11:54 am
4evameme BRONZE, Portsmouth, Virginia
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Favorite Quote:
it aint disrespect if you telln the truth

your words are the key to start my morning i love it its amazing sometimes i just have to do what that say those words brought a smile to my face

on Nov. 2 2012 at 10:38 pm
TaylorWintry DIAMOND, Carrollton, Texas
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Favorite Quote:
"Never fear shadows. They simply mean there's a light shining somewhere nearby." - Unknown

This is really good! Great job! Keep writing, and good luck on your future writing endeavors!  

Jed234 BRONZE said...
on Oct. 11 2012 at 4:57 pm
Jed234 BRONZE, Riverview, Florida
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Favorite Quote:
The power of ingenuity is not only in our dreams but in our hands.

Nice Job its really good if you need beats hit me up but also I Rap too I havent uploaded alot of my work here but if you want more Hit me up

Jed234 BRONZE said...
on Oct. 11 2012 at 4:36 pm
Jed234 BRONZE, Riverview, Florida
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Favorite Quote:
The power of ingenuity is not only in our dreams but in our hands.

Haha ^ Bro you ctack me up this brotha wasnt being as serious as you ae taking it chill its just a warm up personally id rather listen to this than some of the crap on the radio.

Phenix BRONZE said...
on Sep. 13 2012 at 12:44 am
Phenix BRONZE, Brighton, Other
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Favorite Quote:
People are able to hold onto hope, since death is that which can not be seen.

All I can say- lol

on Aug. 28 2012 at 9:47 pm
angel.love BRONZE, Moberly, Missouri
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Favorite Quote:
live life with a purpose.

i like the way the lyrics flow it just has a happy feeling and that is something a lot of people struggle with in writing like me you should check out some of my writing

on Aug. 20 2011 at 11:54 pm
Suziepatricia BRONZE, Wickliffe, Ohio
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I like this. Most people don't write happy anymore :)

sage.l said...
on Jul. 13 2011 at 12:42 pm
Tomorrow is another day.the nice day.

on Mar. 26 2011 at 5:57 pm
Allthegoodnamesaretaken BRONZE, OKC, Oklahoma
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Favorite Quote:
Through every dark night, there's a bright day after that. -Tupac

if this is a poem its great but if its a hiphop song then, you need more multis, wordplay, internal rhymes, etc. but still great concept. I'm feelin it.

DoubleDown said...
on Jan. 12 2011 at 10:31 am
DoubleDown,
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well thet was a good idea but some lines were repidative

IansLover GOLD said...
on Sep. 19 2010 at 8:00 pm
IansLover GOLD, Otisco, Indiana
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Favorite Quote:
"Moshimo anata kanarazu no naka de ai... ai to issho ni anata no kokoro soshite tamashii."

(translation: If you fall in love.... Love with your heart and soul.)

Nice. This is the kind of work that just makes you feel better. There needs to be more songs like this played on the radio.

on Aug. 14 2010 at 2:36 pm
WhingsOfAnOutcast BRONZE, Victora, Texas
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Favorite Quote:
"A sincere artist tries to create something which is, in itself, a living thing."~Painter William Dobell

I really love this!! everyone should think this way

Tiara BRONZE said...
on Jun. 21 2010 at 7:20 pm
Tiara BRONZE, Princess Anne, Maryland
3 articles 6 photos 7 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Don't look back,..but look beyond''.

I Really feel dhiis poem,i thank yhu wuld a gud artist and poet,yhu bring so much life to yhur poetry and it sinks in to dha reader...evry 1 wans2 git away from dha world some time and ths poem can take yhu away..it took me away.......... this is real gud..imma ya numbr 1 FAN

on May. 12 2010 at 11:50 am
invasion-of-the-asians BRONZE, Greenville, South Carolina
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Favorite Quote:
keep on keeping on

i really like this. sometimes you just gotta wake up feeling like this and don' let anybody else ruin your day. no matter how hard they try, just keep on keeping on :)

KE$HA said...
on May. 3 2010 at 9:56 am
its aight my son


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