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Moonlit Tears

Dark… and cold,
Winter, grows old
The young…and old,
Grow weary, of stories told.

I wonder, at what happens next.
As I stare at the supposedly blest.
A shadow of truth, comes into her eyes,
As she sees, I see right through her lies.

She begs forgive me, but it’s to late,
Her lies were her demise…

Tonight, the moonlight cries,
Cause yesterday my lover died.
They took her soul,
And her life,
And with it mine.
I ask, don’t mourn for me,
But I again my lover must see.
Don’t come this way,
No don’t follow me.
For tomorrow,
I enter a tomb of shadows

Loss… and pain
It drives me, insane
I… can’t take
Losing you, this way

I wander, this dark day
Look in their eyes and they’ll turn away
No one is, here too stay
They come and then they go away

They scream help me, but it’s too late
Their lies were their demise

Tonight, the moonlight cries,
Cause yesterday my lover died.
They took her soul,
And her life,
And with it mine.
I ask, don’t mourn for me,
But I again my lover must see.
Don’t come this way,
No don’t follow me.
For tomorrow,
I enter a tomb of shadows

Tonight, the moonlight cries,
Cause yesterday my lover died.
They took her soul,
And her life,
And with it mine.
I ask, don’t mourn for me,
But I again my lover must see.
Don’t come this way,
No don’t follow me.
For tomorrow,
I enter a tomb of shadows

Goodbye…




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tia94 said...
May 2, 2010 at 5:03 pm:

hth was amazing.dude i loved it i just cant believe tht it was that well written.you should b very proud of your songs.they r great.check out some of my things too/.

 

 
BloodForInk replied...
May 3, 2010 at 10:57 am :
thank you. I love this song. I have alot more I just havent had the time to post them. thanks again this means alot to me
 
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green-eyed-angle said...
Feb. 27, 2010 at 7:28 pm:
That was vert emonatinal and it was really good
 
BloodForInk replied...
Mar. 3, 2010 at 2:29 pm :
thank you, I've actually forgotten what I wrote it about because I wrote it so long ago. But thank you, it means a lot to me when ppl like my songs :)
 
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Lonleydandy said...
Nov. 24, 2009 at 1:22 pm:
I really like this!!!!
 
BloodForInk replied...
Nov. 24, 2009 at 10:15 pm :
Thank you, I like it too haha I wrote it. It has a lot of depth to it. It meas alot to me
 
Lonleydandy replied...
Nov. 25, 2009 at 8:28 am :
I can see how it would. You could really see the emotion in the song.
 
BloodForInk replied...
Nov. 25, 2009 at 11:35 pm :
yea I based it off of a poem that a very food friend and I wrote.
 
Lonleydandy replied...
Nov. 26, 2009 at 10:13 am :
That's cool. Haha, all my poems are based off of the crappy things that happen to me....hahahaha.
 
BloodForInk replied...
Nov. 26, 2009 at 10:30 am :
that's cool. I have alot more poems but I haven't put them on yet
 
Lonleydandy replied...
Nov. 26, 2009 at 10:40 am :
You should, I'd read them..hahaha
 
BloodForInk replied...
Nov. 26, 2009 at 1:55 pm :
well I'm waiting for one to be approved
 
Lonleydandy replied...
Nov. 26, 2009 at 5:29 pm :
That's cool. So am I..haha, and I'm waiting on a friend to critique another before I put it up.
 
BloodForInk replied...
Nov. 26, 2009 at 6:35 pm :
yea I hate waiting lol. Thats cool, I like having my friends read what I write. I enjoy their feedback
 
Lonleydandy replied...
Nov. 26, 2009 at 6:55 pm :
Yah, I dont' find myself very patient, and I submitted this one poem over a month ago...hahaha [i like the word ha]...hahaha
 
BloodForInk replied...
Nov. 26, 2009 at 6:58 pm :
yea it sucks lol. You like the word ha?
 
Lonleydandy replied...
Nov. 26, 2009 at 7:16 pm :
yah...haha, haven't you noticed!? I have it in almost EVERY comment...hahahaha
 
BloodForInk replied...
Nov. 26, 2009 at 7:30 pm :
hahaha yea I guess so. I like Rumpelstiltskin haha
 
Lonleydandy replied...
Nov. 26, 2009 at 8:03 pm :
haha, okay..........hahahaha
 
BloodForInk replied...
Nov. 26, 2009 at 9:08 pm :
yea it sounds funny :)
 
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