Numb Now

November 1, 2009
By musicislife GOLD, Fairfax, Virginia
musicislife GOLD, Fairfax, Virginia
15 articles 0 photos 35 comments

Favorite Quote:
in the end the big picture doesn't even matter it's the little things that make the best memories and life lessons


eyeliner in the form of tear drops listen to the clock as it goes tic toc as another heartbreaks watch the cigarette smoke as it fills the room and alcohol fumes cover me like tattoos as another heart breaks

Chorus
Well i say you don't know the pain you say you feel the same well i say you don't feel s***

verse 2
Well i've been stuck in my ways yea i've been stuck for more than days but i'm trying to make a change yea i know you heard it all way before but here i stand a broken looking at these broken plans and all i wanted to do was take your left hand but jesus christ i'm so tried of all the fights so if you don't wanna leave i'll pack my things and be on that first flight

chorus
well i say you don't know the pain and you say you fell the same but i say you don't fell s*** no you dont fell s*** well i don't fell s*** anymore



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Lana15 BRONZE said...
on Mar. 28 2012 at 10:31 pm
Lana15 BRONZE, Matteson, Illinois
1 article 0 photos 2 comments

Favorite Quote:
"The truth hurts and those lies heal"

I like this! Its honest!

RitaRules said...
on Dec. 7 2011 at 1:14 pm
RitaRules, Paris, Tennessee
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I would've enjoyed this if it wasn't depressing. And if you actually capitalized some words.

naruto freak said...
on Oct. 26 2011 at 2:14 pm
why did you useso much swering like you used to much of the word s*** other than that it's good

Proof SILVER said...
on Oct. 26 2011 at 12:27 pm
Proof SILVER, Silver Spring, Maryland
5 articles 0 photos 9 comments

Favorite Quote:
The world is yours you just have to take it

this is a magnificent peice

on Oct. 26 2011 at 9:35 am
theunimaginable BRONZE, Koshkonong, Missouri
1 article 0 photos 5 comments

Favorite Quote:
Live for today, not the past nor future. - Me :)

This is just amazing. It just blows my mind how awesome this is :) Great job!!

on Jun. 17 2011 at 10:05 am
DanniTwin502 PLATINUM, Wake Forest, North Carolina
25 articles 0 photos 20 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Everything Happens for a reason."
"The only thing I know, is I don't know anything."
"Would you rather me be honest, or lie?"

I really like this! I love the lines with the "smoke like tattoos" and how you talk about wanting to change and also saying how if they can't leave you're more then willing to go! This is phenominal!

Kiyoko GOLD said...
on Feb. 4 2011 at 11:34 pm
Kiyoko GOLD, Knoxville, Tennessee
10 articles 0 photos 43 comments

Favorite Quote:
Independence is my happiness, I view things as they are without regard to place or person. My country is the world, and my religion is to do good. - Thomas Paine

I like this song, I think it has real potential. the line "alcohol fumes cover me like tattoos" is a great line. My only suggestion is to find a way to make your chorus stronger. Maybe have a really strong line in there, just to continue to keep the listeners attention through the piece. Good work!

 


on Oct. 20 2010 at 5:17 pm
StarsandBrokenHearts BRONZE, Kanab, Utah
3 articles 0 photos 4 comments

Favorite Quote:
"If you leave, you're leaving the best so you'll have to settle for less." Weezy F. Baby

wow i really love this! it's great!

on Mar. 16 2010 at 2:45 am
SadieJayy BRONZE, Lamar, Missouri
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"eyeliner in the form of tear drops listen to the clock as it goes tic toc"

I love it!

hun, you are truly amazing!

on Mar. 12 2010 at 4:48 pm
AlexandraVasari PLATINUM, Fort Stewart, Georgia
28 articles 4 photos 174 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Writing songs is super intimate. It's a bit like getting naked"~ Gwen Stefani

:)your welcome and yeah i like some of their songs

on Mar. 12 2010 at 1:36 am
musicislife GOLD, Fairfax, Virginia
15 articles 0 photos 35 comments

Favorite Quote:
in the end the big picture doesn't even matter it's the little things that make the best memories and life lessons

thanks and somewhat

on Mar. 12 2010 at 1:35 am
musicislife GOLD, Fairfax, Virginia
15 articles 0 photos 35 comments

Favorite Quote:
in the end the big picture doesn't even matter it's the little things that make the best memories and life lessons

not really trying to say anything to people at all just stories of my life

on Mar. 11 2010 at 12:28 am
AlexandraVasari PLATINUM, Fort Stewart, Georgia
28 articles 4 photos 174 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Writing songs is super intimate. It's a bit like getting naked"~ Gwen Stefani

i like this, it's edgy it reminds me of staind, do you listen to them?

kaiaray said...
on Mar. 6 2010 at 12:47 pm
this is goo i like it but what is it tryin too say to ppl

on Mar. 4 2010 at 6:54 pm
musicislife GOLD, Fairfax, Virginia
15 articles 0 photos 35 comments

Favorite Quote:
in the end the big picture doesn't even matter it's the little things that make the best memories and life lessons

thanks ya i cant seem to top this one lol

on Feb. 24 2010 at 12:27 pm
Infear&Faith. SILVER, Kenton, Ohio
5 articles 0 photos 13 comments

Favorite Quote:
“Somewhere someone is thinking of you. Someone is calling you an angel. This person is using celestial colors to paint your image. Someone is making you into a vision so beautiful that it can only live in the mind. Someone is thinking of the way you"

<3 this is awesome

on Feb. 18 2010 at 3:50 pm
musicislife GOLD, Fairfax, Virginia
15 articles 0 photos 35 comments

Favorite Quote:
in the end the big picture doesn't even matter it's the little things that make the best memories and life lessons

thanks ^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^

on Feb. 17 2010 at 10:17 am
mellow_melon PLATINUM, Jefferson, Maryland
41 articles 14 photos 67 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Life is not measured by the number of breaths we take, but my the number of moments that take our breath away."

wow that was really good! i love it!

on Feb. 16 2010 at 11:02 am
SoulSurvivor92 BRONZE, Park Ridge, Illinois
3 articles 0 photos 3 comments
I like this poem so much. Its so beautiful and full of emotion. Keep working.

on Jan. 16 2010 at 1:35 pm
ElizNieves PLATINUM, Chicago, Illinois
36 articles 13 photos 49 comments

Favorite Quote:
"It's funny. Don't ever tell anybody anything. If you do, you start missing everybody." The Catcher in the Rye

This reminds me of Green Day's lyrics




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