Don't This Seem Perfect?

October 25, 2009
By lyricist PLATINUM, West Pittston, Pennsylvania
lyricist PLATINUM, West Pittston, Pennsylvania
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Favorite Quote:
" How dare you give them so much power"


Alone in the dark
Out on the lawn
You say you love me
And I reply me too

You hold me close
Keep me warm
I’m your girl
And you’re my man

Don’t this seem perfect?

To bad It don’t mean
What I wish it did
Cause he’s still out there
Somewhere
Come on if only for tonight
Make me forget his existence

You hold my hand
We walk down the street
You kiss my cheek
I know you’ll never leave

We sing a song
That only we know
An inside joke
For lovers to show

Don’t this seem perfect?

To bad It don’t mean
What I wish it did
Cause he’s still out there
Somewhere
Come on if only for tonight
Make me forget his existence

And damn I wish I could forget
I wish I loved you like this
I wish you didn’t know it

I see it in your eyes
Every time you look at me
Its slowly making me recede
To your arms of safety

To bad It don’t mean
What I wish it did
Cause he’s still out there
Somewhere
Come on if only for tonight
Make me forget his existence



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Lonleydandy said...
on Nov. 23 2009 at 8:45 pm
One word: amazing. I love it

on Nov. 23 2009 at 2:59 pm
TamaraN PLATINUM, Kalispell, Montana
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i have a lot of relashion ship poems u should check them i think u would like them

on Nov. 17 2009 at 3:54 pm
Kaylamic SILVER, Glenbeulah, Wisconsin
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I like it :) nice job

on Nov. 11 2009 at 1:31 pm
KelsiLynn15 SILVER, Dell Rapids, South Dakota
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I really like the rythum of your poem, it made me want to keep reading it, relationship poems get really good feedback, so keep up the good writing! =]




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