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You came to me (and)
Said we need to talk
Then suddenly my heart stopped

I began to remember
When you said don’t worry
It’ll last forever

We’ll get through this
No matter what
Then you gave me a kiss

What have I done?
Now I feel like I’m on
The borderline of destruction

I don’t know
But if you do this
I won’t know where to go

It’s like walking through a battlefield
Our life lashes between you eyes

It’s been 2 days now that I’m wondering
Just please, you’re my life

If you say no and it’s over
Then I ill die for you
And I’ll use my last breath
To say I love you

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FlamableFyre This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Jan. 31, 2010 at 4:43 pm
i know exactly how you feel, great poem, loved it!
Jack_Walton said...
Jan. 10, 2010 at 6:52 pm
Well, this is good. Not what I was expecting with a title like 'Borderline of Destruction', but I still thought it conveyed the sense of love very well. Great job!
twiwrite replied...
Jan. 21, 2010 at 2:52 pm
oh my gosh iv been there. its kinda chilling to think about that time, even as its happening again.
wonderful poem!
Lonleydandy said...
Nov. 23, 2009 at 8:50 pm
SOOOO SWEET!!!!!!!!! And honestly, I only say that when I mean it. It was really cute. Keep writing!!!!
Hannahbear said...
Nov. 11, 2009 at 4:04 pm
Awh!!!!!! That is adorable, i wish some guy loved me as much as you love her, this is so so so good :) keep writing, your good at it
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