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I Don't Love You, But I Love You


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[Chorus]
I don’t love you
But I love you
I don’t love you
But I do

I don’t love you
But I love you
I don’t love you
But I do

[Verse 1]
I don’t love you as a guy
I don’t love you as a man
I don’t love you as a boy
But I love you all that I can

[Chorus]
I don’t love you
But I love you
I don’t love you
But I do

I don’t love you
But I love you
I don’t love you
But I do

[Verse 2]
I don’t love you cause of your smarts
I don’t love you cause of your skill
I don’t love you cause of your strength
But I still love you and I will

[Chorus]
I don’t love you
But I love you
I don’t love you
But I do

I don’t love you
But I love you
I don’t love you
But I do

[Verse 3]
I don’t love you cause of your looks
I don’t love you cause of your life
I don’t love you cause of your laughs
But I love you cause of my strife

[Chorus]
I don’t love you
But I love you
I don’t love you
But I do

I don’t love you
But I love you
I don’t love you
But I do

[Verse 4]
I love you cause of your morals
I love you cause of your mood
I love you cause of the memories
But I don’t love you cause you are rude

[Chorus]
I don’t love you
But I love you
I don’t love you
But I do

I don’t love you
But I love you
I don’t love you
But I do

[Verse 5]
I don’t love you
And I love you
I don’t love you
And I do

I don’t love you
And I love you
I don’t’ love you
And I do



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DaleTheWhaleThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. said...
May 10 at 10:05 pm:
I like the topic and the way you go about it, but I think it's too repetitive. The lyrics are a bit too simplistic and unpoetic. Decent, but not great, in the nicest way possible.
 
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Bitneyco2393 said...
Jan. 19 at 12:11 am:
i love this, ive been there
 
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xxthemorriganxxThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. said...
Jan. 13 at 8:28 am:
Oh, I love it!!!
 
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. said...
Jan. 3 at 6:29 pm:
Its creative at cute I love it :)
 
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Jan. 3 at 6:26 pm:
Its repeating all the time but its good more like amazing you should put the verses together to make it seem like a song it looks like a poem. keep at it!
 
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pinkseal09 said...
Jan. 3 at 10:43 am:
dood make up your mind!
 
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TheEyesBehindTheMask said...
Dec. 19, 2011 at 4:32 pm:
 absolutely loved it!!!
 
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CJN0808 said...
Dec. 19, 2011 at 2:40 pm:
I really like your poem! Hey anyone reading this come check out and rate and/or comment on my poems, it would really help me out :)
 
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Morgan N. said...
Dec. 19, 2011 at 8:36 am:
Hey I really liked this It's got a lot of meaning an I totally understand how you felt with this song. 
 
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writerfreak21231This teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. said...
Dec. 15, 2011 at 4:13 pm:
its really good! great job. But i do have to agree it is repetiitive. Do you think u could check out some of my work? thanks.:)(:
 
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writerfreak21231This teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. said...
Dec. 15, 2011 at 4:12 pm:
its really good! great job. But i do have to agree it is repetiitive. Do you think u could check out some of my work? thanks.
 
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BrokenBreeThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. said...
Nov. 27, 2011 at 7:00 pm:
I like it but it's WAY too repetitive.. Change it up a bit?
 
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GirlWhoWroteThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. said...
Nov. 27, 2011 at 10:13 am:
This is pretty good, if a little repititive. I understand what you were trying to say, but it got a little boring with the same words over and over. Still, it was good. Also, if you could check out my work and tell me what you think that would be great!
 
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SmileyFace13This teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. said...
Nov. 19, 2011 at 10:43 pm:
this is pretty good and has deffinite potential but i think you should add more and take out some of the repeatition. It can get tiring and im sure you could add some creative stuff to this :)
 
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resolve said...
Nov. 12, 2011 at 6:21 pm:
awesome job
 
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BookWorm98This teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. said...
Nov. 5, 2011 at 4:57 pm:

This is really good!

 

 
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RashidaRThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. said...
Nov. 5, 2011 at 9:00 am:
wow. this is great! explains why its number one(: but i cant help noticing all the trolls out there....Trolls: y u no stfu? haha GREAT SONG! maybe too repetitive but its really good
 
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SqueakyLoveThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. said...
Oct. 29, 2011 at 2:33 pm:
Alot of repetition but it was good! hope one day you record it and make an album!
 
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she-is-a-strange-duckThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. said...
Oct. 13, 2011 at 7:40 pm:
This is really nice! Something like this happened to me and I do appreciate this because of it. This was much, much better than I expected it to be! keep up the good work!!!
 
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TradeMistakes13This teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. said...
Oct. 10, 2011 at 6:32 pm:
i liked it an all but seriously, it was a little too repetitive for my taste. i think your really talented though. :) :P :D
 
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krissynicole said...
Sept. 22, 2011 at 11:01 am:
I really liked this and would like to see much more from you this is great and so true for so many people in so many ways!!
 
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savviisyodaddy said...
Sept. 22, 2011 at 9:31 am:
This is a good song and i know it's hard to write them cause i have many to up load on here, but the repeat of the "I don't love you but i do." may make some people walk away from the songs. other than that i liked it alot. (:
 
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DALLAS_OG_KILLER said...
Aug. 31, 2011 at 12:20 pm:
good song :D
 
Lonleydandy replied...
Sept. 16, 2011 at 9:42 pm :
Thanks!                         
 
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youcallthatpoetry said...
Aug. 31, 2011 at 10:29 am:
Good poem and structure but basic word schemes that show no real talent or interest in your own work, Show motivation.. Read a thesaurus at least one time a day. Then revise
 
TaleGate replied...
Aug. 31, 2011 at 3:34 pm :
*stifles a giggle. I agree. I wish there was something more I don't know . . . exciting about it? But it does have a nice structure when put into something like a pop song would work.
 
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Aug. 31, 2011 at 8:45 pm :
Just an FYI to the both of you, I am a very talented writer and I have said REPETEDLY that this song SUCKS. I'll be the first to admit that, but there is no reason for either of you to insult me in such a way by telling me that I am in NO way a good writer, because let me tell you that I am [I've moved on to inkpop where it is easier to FIX things] that my vocabulary isn't large enough [because TRUST ME it ABSOLUTELY is] or that I have no talent or motivation [which I do] is NOT acceptable and I... (more »)
 
gleek1234This teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. replied...
Sept. 16, 2011 at 1:45 pm :
this poem is mazing ! dont listen to them haterz
 
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titangods31 said...
Jul. 2, 2011 at 5:01 pm:

Ok I cant sign the chorus in my head, and I think that the verses are really really short. But the comment you wrote was beautiful! I understand that and there is a guy that I like not becuase of any shallow things but because he was right for me, and he taught me a lesson. Then he cheated, and now that is what I write about =( sad subject, good motavation.

 

 
Lonleydandy replied...
Jul. 2, 2011 at 6:56 pm :
Thanks. I honestly liked the comment better than the poem too. I like that you can relate though. Even though it hurts initially, it always gets better.
 
titangods31 replied...
Jul. 2, 2011 at 8:42 pm :
well once in a while... I kinda still like him and it still feels like getting stabbed in the chest every time I see him... but ya know, that's cool =) just makes the passion of my song better
 
Lonleydandy replied...
Jul. 3, 2011 at 10:41 am :
Exactly. I totally understand. The guy that I wrote this about, I see almost every single morning whenever there is school and I have some classes with him…and sometimes lunch. We're still friends because he never knew that I liked him [he liked my best friend, THEN this past year he moved on to another girl who is also my friend..hahaha]. Anyway, you're totally right. The more passion and emotion in the song, the better the song is!
 
titangods31 replied...
Jul. 3, 2011 at 5:48 pm :
Ya but it also hurts =/
 
Lonleydandy replied...
Jul. 4, 2011 at 4:07 pm :
I know, but it'll get better.
 
titangods31 replied...
Jul. 4, 2011 at 4:55 pm :

lets hope so =)

 

 
TaleGate replied...
Aug. 31, 2011 at 3:36 pm :
Yes! I loved the comment. Maybe put the elements from your comment into another song? :)
 
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siddieleeThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. said...
Jul. 1, 2011 at 9:20 am:
I like it a lot :-)
 
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Jul. 1, 2011 at 3:17 pm :
Thanks!                 
 
siddieleeThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. replied...
Jul. 1, 2011 at 10:38 pm :
It actually would be a pretty nice song :-)
 
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Kat4ever333This teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. said...
Jun. 26, 2011 at 7:22 pm:
i absoletly love it. i wrote something like this a while ago but i threw it away beecause i thought no one would like it... or they would say its to repetative
 
Lonleydandy replied...
Jun. 26, 2011 at 7:25 pm :
Hahaha, I totally understand thinking that. Honestly, when I wrote this, I didn't even care what people thought of it, I just posted it because I wanted to. And yes, I have gotten some negative comments about repetition and what not, but that's okay because I know that I can do so much better now!
 
Kat4ever333This teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. replied...
Jun. 26, 2011 at 8:08 pm :
ya... i so get that now because most people dont like my writing because some of it was really dark...but thats how i write so people can just sorta deal with it.
 
Lonleydandy replied...
Jun. 26, 2011 at 8:18 pm :
Exactly. I have a friend who is just like that, the dark writing thing, I mean. She's all into that kind of stuff, so she tends to pull in readers who like her stuff. Just because it is different, doesn't make it bad!
 
titangods31 replied...
Jul. 2, 2011 at 5:03 pm :

hey I write darkly too but some people think its beautiful, and if they dont, they can deal.

 

 
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freeflow23This teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. said...
Jun. 26, 2011 at 6:18 pm:
I love it! You seem so down to earth and relatable.
 
Lonleydandy replied...
Jun. 26, 2011 at 6:43 pm :
Why thank you so very much!
 
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Lauren826 said...
Jun. 4, 2011 at 6:16 pm:

i think this was wrote really good.

 

 
Lonleydandy replied...
Jun. 5, 2011 at 6:38 pm :
Thanks.           
 
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RanaHewezi1998 said...
Jun. 4, 2011 at 11:25 am:
i can't really relate to this but its well written
 
Lonleydandy replied...
Jun. 4, 2011 at 4:44 pm :
THanks, and, honestly, I can't relate to it anymore either....hahahaha
 
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