Her and the Cigarettes

October 17, 2009
By AlextheKat27 SILVER, Mesa, Arizona
AlextheKat27 SILVER, Mesa, Arizona
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Favorite Quote:
"When confronted by a difficult problem, you can solve it more easily by reducing it to the question, "How would the Lone Ranger handle this?" --Dilbert


All those times that you would brush me off
And I would never really understand
Thinking bout all the times you held my hand
Back when I thought you were a better man
So now you’re calling you-and-me off,
While you’re saying that you still want to be friends
But sorry that’s not the way this story ends
You broke my heart so what’s left to defend

‘Cause you said you loved me
But never said I was the only one
Found out about her and the cigarettes
And now I’m kinda glad we’re done
I was so happy that I caught your eye
Now I know that I wasn’t the only one
You’ve left me with all these regrets
Wish you could see the damage you’ve done
Should have known from the beginning
But it still took me by surprise
Should have known when I looked into your eyes
That I shouldn’t have believed any of your lies

All the words you sang when you sung me to sleep
Always made my knees go weak
You held me and kissed me on the cheek
Then said sorry I couldn’t call you this week
Now I’m letting you go without a peep
I’m always trying to avoid a fight
While I know I’m crying myself to sleep tonight
Nothing you do now will make this right

Cause you said you loved me
But not that I was the only one
Found out about her and the cigarettes
And now I’m kinda glad we’re done
I was so happy that I’d caught your eye
Now I know that I wasn’t the only one
You’ve left me with all these regrets
Wish you could see the damage you’ve done
Should have known from the beginning
But it still took me by surprise
Should have known when I looked into your eyes
That I shouldn’t have believed any of your lies



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Cody1 said...
on Jul. 28 2011 at 5:49 pm
Cody1, Anacoco, Louisiana
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If you make a demo you should let me know i know people at capital records i might be able to get you a contract with them

on Jul. 23 2011 at 8:48 pm
Silenced_in_Anxiety GOLD, Easton, Pennsylvania
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Favorite Quote:
"Have you ever been hurt and the place tries to heal a bit, and you just pull the scar off of it over and over again." - Rosa Parks

Take this to a record label. You're an AMAZING writer. This deserves a grammy. great job :)

on Aug. 10 2010 at 7:43 pm
Faithband3 BRONZE, Westbury, New York
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i loooooooove this awesome song i could hear this on the radio well written

on Dec. 8 2009 at 4:40 pm
Lost_In_LALA_Land BRONZE, Albuquerque, New Mexico
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Favorite Quote:
The akward moment when you look at someone and you realize what you could be, what you should be, and also that it will probaby never happen...</3

Well... I liked it but as kirids said it could be a song or a story and songs should tell a story so AWESOME!

floaton BRONZE said...
on Oct. 22 2009 at 9:08 pm
floaton BRONZE, E. Setauket, New York
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very nice. creative, not something you see typically. i felt as thought it could be a song? or a story? versitle.


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