Broken

October 16, 2009
By dragonfan SILVER, Arcidia, Indiana
dragonfan SILVER, Arcidia, Indiana
9 articles 1 photo 213 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Death truly makes an artist"


My heart is broken,
no one understands just how I feel and what I'm going through right now my first love said "We're through! I found anouther girl so this is good-bye______ I still want to be friends and I'll always love you,but just as a friend." Right then I started to cry. My heart was broken,how could he do that to me and just forget that I even exsist. He doesn't e-mail me,call me, or even talk to me when I see him. One day he finnaly did walk up to me and he said "This won't work.I never want to see you again,we can't evan be friends______." My heat just broke, and it's not fixable I'll always have a part of me missing_____ but I just have to continue life and try forget about him,no matter how much i love him,because my heart is broken,I just have to continue life even though my heart is broken.


The author's comments:
This is something I wrote because I love to write songs about how I feel and me and I was feeling sad and unloved so I wrote this.Comment,good or bad,rate, tell me what you think!

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on Jan. 31 2011 at 4:27 pm
WritingLoverForever PLATINUM, Bowling Green, Ohio
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Favorite Quote:
It's not about success; it's about significance.

No one can make you feel inferior without your consent.

You basically summarized my entire eighth grade year in just one short passage. lol Amazing job, and I totally feel your pain. Your first love is always the toughest one to get over.

vnprice BRONZE said...
on Apr. 15 2010 at 8:18 am
vnprice BRONZE, Abita Springs, Louisiana
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This is great!

on Dec. 1 2009 at 5:16 pm
LoveLikeWoe DIAMOND, LeSueur, MN, Minnesota
54 articles 2 photos 748 comments

Favorite Quote:
Whoever laughs first has the sickest mind.

this.... is..... AWESOME!! :D

on Nov. 23 2009 at 3:05 pm
dragonfan SILVER, Arcidia, Indiana
9 articles 1 photo 213 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Death truly makes an artist"

My new peace of work is pending approval it is called "Friends" and its about my best friend dilian so when its posted check it out!!!

on Nov. 21 2009 at 10:11 am
dragonfan SILVER, Arcidia, Indiana
9 articles 1 photo 213 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Death truly makes an artist"

thanks and no offense to any guys but i learned something guys change way to fast and never trust your first opinion of guys.

NicAliceF GOLD said...
on Nov. 20 2009 at 10:48 am
NicAliceF GOLD, Tacoma, Washington
12 articles 1 photo 34 comments

Favorite Quote:
There is nothing to writing. All you do is sit down at a typewriter and bleed.
Ernest Hemingway

The moral of all this is that boys suck! ;)Girl keep writing, it's the best type of medicine. Your words definantly protray how you feel and I could sense that from reading this.

It's beautiful.

iesha928 said...
on Nov. 19 2009 at 1:33 pm
iesha928, Detroit, Michigan
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i love this song!!

commen-sense said...
on Nov. 17 2009 at 3:52 pm
guessing thats a bad thing

commen-sense said...
on Nov. 17 2009 at 3:51 pm
im guessing thats a bad thing...

on Nov. 17 2009 at 2:21 pm
dragonfan SILVER, Arcidia, Indiana
9 articles 1 photo 213 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Death truly makes an artist"

thanks im still working on getting over him but ill deal. i have a new crush but every time i look at him i see my ex

commen-sense said...
on Nov. 15 2009 at 10:37 pm
i agree... with all of it

on Nov. 15 2009 at 11:51 am
heretic-half-breed SILVER, Jim Thorpe, Pennsylvania
5 articles 0 photos 2 comments

Favorite Quote:
live, laugh, love.

do not lie cheat or drink. but if u must lie, lie in the arms of the one you love, if you must cheat, cheat death, and if you must drink, drink to those moments that take ur breath away.

to be or not to be, that is the question

i love the poem. it is how i felt when my ex left me for my friend. you are an amazing writer. and think of it this way. he hurt you, he dont deserve you. the man who treats you like your his world and will do anything to make you happy is the guy you want. and i hope to see more of your writings.

on Nov. 12 2009 at 1:58 pm
dragonfan SILVER, Arcidia, Indiana
9 articles 1 photo 213 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Death truly makes an artist"

aww thanks i gust sent in a free virse called " im done with you" me and some of my friends wrote it it'll be on teenink soon :)

on Nov. 12 2009 at 10:50 am
relaxingcry GOLD, Buffalo, New York
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Favorite Quote:
i go hard forever thats just how im designed thats just how im built see the look in my eyes take all this from me and im still going to survive

your really talented keep writin i would love to read more of your work

on Oct. 31 2009 at 7:35 pm
dragonfan SILVER, Arcidia, Indiana
9 articles 1 photo 213 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Death truly makes an artist"

thanks,ive already found a guy that i like but im not sure if im ready for anouther bf yet

13islucky said...
on Oct. 31 2009 at 2:30 pm
13islucky, North Hills, California
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Favorite Quote:
Be yourself everyone else is already taken

uggggh that is so sucky you'll find someone good

on Oct. 31 2009 at 9:23 am
dragonfan SILVER, Arcidia, Indiana
9 articles 1 photo 213 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Death truly makes an artist"

No,she actually thinks he is nice,sweet,caring and i tryed warning her but she wouldnt listed so when he breaks her heart she will agree with me

13islucky said...
on Oct. 30 2009 at 6:52 pm
13islucky, North Hills, California
0 articles 2 photos 46 comments

Favorite Quote:
Be yourself everyone else is already taken

does the other girl know what a jerk he is??

on Oct. 28 2009 at 1:57 pm
dragonfan SILVER, Arcidia, Indiana
9 articles 1 photo 213 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Death truly makes an artist"

yes and i really loved him but he left me for anouther girl =(

13islucky said...
on Oct. 27 2009 at 6:46 pm
13islucky, North Hills, California
0 articles 2 photos 46 comments

Favorite Quote:
Be yourself everyone else is already taken

Good writing skills! the ________ is for your name right?? that guy is a jerk!! he doesn't deserve your love


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