Strange Girl

October 11, 2009
By Laina101 SILVER, Goldonna, Louisiana
Laina101 SILVER, Goldonna, Louisiana
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Favorite Quote:
YOU'LL NEVER LEAVE WHERE YOU ARE UNTIL YOU DECIDE WHERE YOU'D RATHER BE


I look into the mirror
and I always see,
that strange girl
looking back at me.

She looks upset,
even more then before,
maybe shes just hurting,
maybe shes just sore.

She looks very tired,
with black under her eyes.
The blank look on her face
is errupted with a sigh.

I never understand
why shes always in my house,
creeping through the hallways,
quiet as a mouse.

Sometimes shes smiling
until she looks back at me,
maybe she doesn't like,
wut she always sees.

I might spend hours
watching this strange girl,
seeing her face
makes me wanna hurl.

She never has a mood,
that seems set in stone,
she reminds me of
a broken bone.

It seems to be healing,
but it's still broken,
so close to success
i shouldn't have spoken.

When I realize who she is
I always seem to cry,
looking at myself
thinking I was standing by.



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on Oct. 24 2012 at 2:07 pm
Sissybug2012 PLATINUM, Union, Missouri
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Favorite Quote:
"the greatest thing you'll ever learn, is just to love and be loved in return." -MOULIN ROUGE (song lyrics)

omg i love this....very good flow....good rhyme...perfect

caralynn said...
on Jan. 3 2011 at 6:58 pm
wow this is truely amazing your a good writer, keep it up!!!

KaylaAnne GOLD said...
on Oct. 21 2009 at 3:23 pm
KaylaAnne GOLD, North Platte, Nebraska
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Brilliant! You have awesome talent. Keep writing and submitting your work because you are really, very good. : )


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