Strange Girl

October 11, 2009
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I look into the mirror
and I always see,
that strange girl
looking back at me.

She looks upset,
even more then before,
maybe shes just hurting,
maybe shes just sore.

She looks very tired,
with black under her eyes.
The blank look on her face
is errupted with a sigh.

I never understand
why shes always in my house,
creeping through the hallways,
quiet as a mouse.

Sometimes shes smiling
until she looks back at me,
maybe she doesn't like,
wut she always sees.

I might spend hours
watching this strange girl,
seeing her face
makes me wanna hurl.

She never has a mood,
that seems set in stone,
she reminds me of
a broken bone.

It seems to be healing,
but it's still broken,
so close to success
i shouldn't have spoken.

When I realize who she is
I always seem to cry,
looking at myself
thinking I was standing by.

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sarah.small18 said...
Oct. 24, 2012 at 2:07 pm
omg i love this....very good flow....good rhyme...perfect
caralynn said...
Jan. 3, 2011 at 6:58 pm
wow this is truely amazing your a good writer, keep it up!!!
ckalani said...
Oct. 21, 2009 at 3:23 pm
Brilliant! You have awesome talent. Keep writing and submitting your work because you are really, very good. : )
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