I Killed The Word Apology (I.K.T.W.A.)

October 3, 2009
By jawproperty93 PLATINUM, Jupiter, Florida
jawproperty93 PLATINUM, Jupiter, Florida
24 articles 11 photos 29 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Fall Seven Times, Stand Up Eight"


Chorus: I can't believe you lied to me,
For my heart just died on me,
This is a song for the innocent and hurt,
Sorry is not a word to be said,
Unless it comes from the heart,
There's no meaning unless it's meant,
Now I have this feelin, inside me(x2),
I've killed the word apology.

I overslept the spoiling of one's vision,
For no one seems to care how others feel,
One so gullable, as if they were me,
Witness this feeling of worry,
As their eyes fill with black holes,
And in their heart lies a brick wall,
Causing their outside to fade,
They won't know who they ere.

Chorus: I can't believe you lied to me,
For my heart just died on me,
This is a song for the innocent and hurt,
Sorry is not a word to be said,
Unless it comes from the heart,
There's no meaning unless it's meant,
Now I have this feelin, inside me(x2),
I've killed the word apology.

There's a sense of me you don't know,
They were the webs that needed to mend,
We were the spiders that should've saved them,
They marched with one speaking of the lost,
We're not gonna take it in anymore,
This is only a scene from our lives,
You have made us the heart of this storm,
As morners start to fall so far and so hard.

Standing over pools of denial,
Is what we were when we were with you,
And now we're taking over,
As I killed . . .
Every word . . .
Having to do with sorry, apologies.



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on Aug. 6 2010 at 1:32 pm
jawproperty93 PLATINUM, Jupiter, Florida
24 articles 11 photos 29 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Fall Seven Times, Stand Up Eight"

I don't think they are going to use it lol

but its whatever!


on Aug. 6 2010 at 1:31 pm
jawproperty93 PLATINUM, Jupiter, Florida
24 articles 11 photos 29 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Fall Seven Times, Stand Up Eight"

thank you, that means a lot

 


on May. 2 2010 at 1:23 pm
Ms.Understood, Laramie, Wyoming
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Please let me now when that band sings this song because i would really like to hear it :)

on May. 2 2010 at 1:21 pm
Ms.Understood, Laramie, Wyoming
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WOW! you got some serious talent. this is like...so different. i am sick of cliches and this is far from it. you have something of your own that could really be taught to some of these new song writers of today. keep writing! 

on Jan. 24 2010 at 12:58 pm
jawproperty93 PLATINUM, Jupiter, Florida
24 articles 11 photos 29 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Fall Seven Times, Stand Up Eight"

wat do you mean you don't know wat this is for

on Jan. 20 2010 at 6:36 pm
jawproperty93 PLATINUM, Jupiter, Florida
24 articles 11 photos 29 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Fall Seven Times, Stand Up Eight"

thanks, i have a band already singing in, just scroll down on da page a little

angell BRONZE said...
on Jan. 20 2010 at 6:25 pm
angell BRONZE, Hancock, Maine
3 articles 0 photos 5 comments

Favorite Quote:
IDK, IDC, OMG, LOL, NVM

LOL! This is an amazing song/poem. And I agree with others that it is hard to get the tune if you don't have a nice beat. But if you do get a band to sing it that be amazing for you. Cause that is an amazing thing that you have started their and I hope you post more songs/poems.

on Jan. 9 2010 at 12:02 pm
jawproperty93 PLATINUM, Jupiter, Florida
24 articles 11 photos 29 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Fall Seven Times, Stand Up Eight"

i just now got asked by a band to sing it so cant wait to hear it

on Jan. 9 2010 at 11:59 am
jawproperty93 PLATINUM, Jupiter, Florida
24 articles 11 photos 29 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Fall Seven Times, Stand Up Eight"

yeah sure im trying to get bands to use my stuff, cause i cant sing lol but yeah as long as i get credit, i will check out ur band too thank you sooo much denis

on Jan. 1 2010 at 7:04 pm
hey this is denis i thought id let you know i think this is a very creative song/poem! i was actually wondering if you would let my band use this for a most likely acoustic song and we'll give you full credit for it!? so please respond and if you dont want us to than thats cool its your stuff. but anyways very creative and if you wanna check out my band we have a myspace, the name is actually the name of this song, (i killed the word apology) or the url is www.myspace .com /iktwa our genre is like hard rock/screamo but we can sing this is you let us? so ya, thanks for your time.
-denis-

denis death said...
on Jan. 1 2010 at 6:59 pm
hi i dont know what this is for

400king BRONZE said...
on Dec. 21 2009 at 11:40 am
400king BRONZE, Hemet, California
1 article 0 photos 23 comments

Favorite Quote:
a poem is never finished, just abandoned

yeah i like this song but it's hard to really get it without a beat. what i would do if i were you is find some badn on myspace or youtube and ask them to sing your song if they like it. i've done that before but failed to come up with a song, haha. but that is a great way to learn.

on Dec. 16 2009 at 10:54 am
jawproperty93 PLATINUM, Jupiter, Florida
24 articles 11 photos 29 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Fall Seven Times, Stand Up Eight"

I'm gunna be a song writter when I'm older so you'll hear it then, cause i'm not that good at singin

on Dec. 16 2009 at 10:53 am
jawproperty93 PLATINUM, Jupiter, Florida
24 articles 11 photos 29 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Fall Seven Times, Stand Up Eight"

Probably rock

on Dec. 16 2009 at 10:51 am
jawproperty93 PLATINUM, Jupiter, Florida
24 articles 11 photos 29 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Fall Seven Times, Stand Up Eight"

Thanx I've been writin for a really long time and finally got the chance to get my word out, when I get older i'm definitly being a song writter

on Nov. 24 2009 at 6:45 pm
very cool song, what genre, (hard 2 tell without a recording)

on Nov. 24 2009 at 3:22 pm
whisperingofdawn GOLD, Colorado City, Arizona
17 articles 12 photos 87 comments
nice! it has alot of emotion. i would love to hear it sung!

thatgirl_93 said...
on Nov. 24 2009 at 9:43 am
wow. this is great. I've been writing since the fourth grade and I love to read what other people write. this is fab (:

on Oct. 17 2009 at 9:23 pm
jawproperty93 PLATINUM, Jupiter, Florida
24 articles 11 photos 29 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Fall Seven Times, Stand Up Eight"

thanks!!!!!!

Lonleydandy said...
on Oct. 17 2009 at 9:06 pm
Love it :D I have 'heard' that you are a really great writer..I will be sure to check out some more of your work.


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