Precious

October 2, 2009
By Thandiwe GOLD, New York, New York
Thandiwe GOLD, New York, New York
13 articles 0 photos 65 comments

Favorite Quote:
Just Write It. (follow me on tumblr: thandielove13.tumblr.com)


I know you don’t notice me,
Don’t even know that I exist.
But in all of my dreams,






You’re in “Bop” magazines.
Your face is so handsome and precious to me,
I don’t care about you’re flaws,





You’re my fantasy
I go crazy thinkin’ about you
And I really want you.
You don’t know even know
Just wanna….

Chorus: Yea eah eah e eah eah…
You’re…my…pre-cious
You’re cute, you’re smart,
You’re everything I want, (everything I want, everything I wa-ant)
Yea eah eah e eah eah…
You’re…my…pre-cious

I stare at you in Science class,
Ask the teacher for a hallway pass…
Just so I could see your face.
I have this overwhelming crush,
Can’t even tell my friends.
That I like you very much,
But then again…
You make me wanna

Yeah eah eah e eah eah…
You’re…my…pre-cious
You’re cute, you’re smart,
You’re everything I want, (everything I want, everything I wa-ant)
Yea eah eah e eah eah…
You’re…my…pre-cious

What will, I do?
I really like u
Maybe I’ll move on, who knows?
Oh

Yea eah eah e eah eah…
You’re…my…pre-cious
You’re cute, you’re smart,
You’re everything I want, (everything I want, everything I wa-ant)
Yea eah eah e eah eah…
You’re…my…pre-cious

Yea eah eah e eah eah…
You’re…my…pre-cious
You’re cute, you’re smart,
You’re everything I want, (everything I want, everything I wa-ant)
Yea eah eah e eah eah…
You’re…my…pre-cious


The author's comments:
This is song is really special to me, i wrote it myself:)

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on Nov. 24 2009 at 11:05 pm
literaryaddict PLATINUM, Albuquerque, New Mexico
23 articles 3 photos 157 comments

Favorite Quote:
"We're almost there and no where near it. All that matters is that we're going." Lorelai Gilmore, Gilmore Girls
"The whole theory of modern education is radically unsound." Lady Bracknell, The Importance of Being Earnest, Oscar Wilde

thanx 4 ur advice heart_peaches! i hope i can work up the courage (sorry if this shows up 2x, it didn't post it the first time)

on Nov. 24 2009 at 11:03 pm
literaryaddict PLATINUM, Albuquerque, New Mexico
23 articles 3 photos 157 comments

Favorite Quote:
"We're almost there and no where near it. All that matters is that we're going." Lorelai Gilmore, Gilmore Girls
"The whole theory of modern education is radically unsound." Lady Bracknell, The Importance of Being Earnest, Oscar Wilde

thanx 4 ur advice heart_peaches. i hope i can work up the courage

Thandiwe GOLD said...
on Nov. 24 2009 at 9:44 am
Thandiwe GOLD, New York, New York
13 articles 0 photos 65 comments

Favorite Quote:
Just Write It. (follow me on tumblr: thandielove13.tumblr.com)

thanks. yeah, its the continuation of crush :)

peach<3 GOLD said...
on Nov. 23 2009 at 9:56 pm
peach<3 GOLD, Portland, Oregon
15 articles 7 photos 30 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Growing old is mandatory, growing up is optional."






- Unknown author.

Hey, isn't this a version of another poem?

Oh, wait... the other one's by U 2!!!

Great job!!! I totally heart your song!

BTW, gl getting your crush! U should just post this poem on his locker with by: your name on it! Good Lux!

Thandiwe GOLD said...
on Nov. 20 2009 at 4:08 pm
Thandiwe GOLD, New York, New York
13 articles 0 photos 65 comments

Favorite Quote:
Just Write It. (follow me on tumblr: thandielove13.tumblr.com)

yup, thanx for the comment

on Nov. 18 2009 at 7:21 pm
KelsiLynn15 SILVER, Dell Rapids, South Dakota
5 articles 0 photos 22 comments
Haha, well then =] totally discard what I said about "she".. He'll come around soon enough girly.. Boys will be boys =] and thnks.. I definetely enjoy my username also.. keep up your work.. email me sometime.. kelsiritter_24@hotmail .com

on Nov. 18 2009 at 1:59 pm
dragonfan SILVER, Arcidia, Indiana
9 articles 1 photo 213 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Death truly makes an artist"

aww im sorry but dont worry youll find a love soon :)

Thandiwe GOLD said...
on Nov. 18 2009 at 10:43 am
Thandiwe GOLD, New York, New York
13 articles 0 photos 65 comments

Favorite Quote:
Just Write It. (follow me on tumblr: thandielove13.tumblr.com)

sadly no :(

Thandiwe GOLD said...
on Nov. 18 2009 at 9:34 am
Thandiwe GOLD, New York, New York
13 articles 0 photos 65 comments

Favorite Quote:
Just Write It. (follow me on tumblr: thandielove13.tumblr.com)

Thanks sooo much sweetNsour (i luv the username) and i'm a gurl lol

on Nov. 17 2009 at 2:33 pm
dragonfan SILVER, Arcidia, Indiana
9 articles 1 photo 213 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Death truly makes an artist"

i completely agree this is amazing and i hope you get/already have you crush =]

on Nov. 11 2009 at 1:50 pm
KelsiLynn15 SILVER, Dell Rapids, South Dakota
5 articles 0 photos 22 comments
Your absolutely extremely good.. don't pay attention to the bad comments either.. because they have their opinion.. but I think your incredible.. please keep writing.. I'm looking forward to your future work.. keep it up stud =]

- =]

PS> Good luck with your crush, if she reads this and realizes how great your personality is, she'll drop to her knees and beg for a first date =]

on Nov. 9 2009 at 8:29 pm
literaryaddict PLATINUM, Albuquerque, New Mexico
23 articles 3 photos 157 comments

Favorite Quote:
"We're almost there and no where near it. All that matters is that we're going." Lorelai Gilmore, Gilmore Girls
"The whole theory of modern education is radically unsound." Lady Bracknell, The Importance of Being Earnest, Oscar Wilde

love ur song. this is just how i feel about this one guy at my school. but i am WAY too shy to do anything.


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