For You

September 10, 2009
By Anonymous

I’ve come to find you in my line of sight.
I’ve come to find myself giving you my heart.
I can’t believe it’s happening so fast.

And now I’ve found
Myself crying out
For you

Chorus:
Now my hearts not so divided
Ever since you and I united
And I could
And I would
Yes I’d fly
For you.

I’ve come to find you starring in my dreams.
I’ve come to find myself smiling constantly.
I can’t believe how much I want it to last.

I can’t keep myself occupied
Long enough to get you off of my mind
I’ve found my reason to live

And now I’ve found
Myself crying out
For you

Chorus

I’ve now a reason to smile
And my hearts now not so fragile
And I feel so much stronger,
The longer I’m with you

Now my hearts not so divided
Ever since you and I united
And I could
And I would
Yes I’d fly
I would fly
For you.


The author's comments:
I am really shy when it comes to writing songs. This is the first one I've ever even KIND OF liked. So tell me what you think. Be honest and be brutal. Thank you!

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Taylor Swift said...
on Dec. 3 2012 at 2:05 pm
This is the most peacefull song I have ever sang! I would love if you could let me have these lyrics because I am Taylor Swwift and I will give you 75% of the income of this song just let me know if I can and I would love to sing this song to the producers and see what they think!   Taylor Swift

on Apr. 18 2012 at 1:17 pm
Emma Valley BRONZE, Scottsdale, Arizona
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It is hard to feel these words without the music but you have a great idea going.  Try and find something to make people relate and feel the words even without music.  I love the line "And I could, And I would, Yes I'd fly, For you"

on Feb. 12 2012 at 6:27 am
its.paigee BRONZE, Ada, Oklahoma
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Favorite Quote:
"Promise yourself to be so strong that nothing can disturb your peace of mind. Look at the sunny side of everything and make optimism come true. Give so much time to the improvement of youself that you have no time to criticize others."

I love this! You used your words differently than most people. Very nice lyrics!

on Jan. 16 2012 at 7:55 pm
EPluribusUnum DIAMOND, Woodbine, Maryland
59 articles 24 photos 280 comments

Favorite Quote:
"I shut my eyes and all the world drops dead;
I lift my lids and all is born again.
(I think I made you up inside my head)."
-Sylvia Plath

This is great! You should be proud, songwriting is tough.

freeforever said...
on Dec. 8 2011 at 11:48 am
So amazing! This is an awsome song. I could hear the tune in my head. So awsome, don't stop writing.

on Nov. 17 2011 at 12:08 pm
DarkenAngel94 SILVER, Teachey, North Carolina
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Favorite Quote:
"What?!?!Dude really??"
"Don't walk in front of me, for i may not follow,
Don't walk behind me, for i may not lead,
But walk beside me and just be my friend."
"You may not know me dont let my name come out of your month, unless your talkin to me"

You must keep writing i loved it. i could hear a beat in my head goes great with the lyrics, must you keep your self down? it GREAT AWESOME GOOD i LOVED LOVED LOVED it, may we team up some day and write together? 

SkinnyJay_23 said...
on Oct. 3 2011 at 10:41 am
The poem is really sweet and cute. (:

Xena White said...
on Oct. 3 2011 at 9:38 am
I Lovee Thee chorus its really pretty. ♥

on Jun. 21 2011 at 12:39 pm
RemyMarin BRONZE, Mansfield, Connecticut
4 articles 1 photo 11 comments

Favorite Quote:
"You really should read more books. You know, those things that look like blocks, but come open on one side."
"I only write when i'm inspired, and I make sure i'm inspired at 9 o'clock every morning."
-Peter DeVries

i defineately loved the chorus, and i did sing it to myself a little.   this is seriously good!  i hope you kept the ones you didn't like anyway...alot of mine i don't like either. but good job!!!!

kaasha BRONZE said...
on Apr. 26 2011 at 8:42 pm
kaasha BRONZE, Roxbury Crossing, Massachusetts
4 articles 0 photos 8 comments

Favorite Quote:
"I'd rather be hated for who I am, than loved for who I am not."- Kurt Cobain

wow! i love it. shows it all.

on Feb. 5 2011 at 8:54 am
KrsytalnBlake14 BRONZE, Vinemont, Alabama
1 article 0 photos 17 comments

Favorite Quote:
Our love grows stronger every lifetime that passes us through.. (:

this song is totally amazing :) Good job, keep on writing?

PeetaMellark said...
on Dec. 21 2010 at 5:47 pm
This reminds me of someone I know! Or, shall I say, someone that I feel this way about =) Really excellent writing, I love the simple and yet complexity of this piece! Keep writing please!

jazzeypha said...
on Sep. 7 2010 at 7:28 am
i didnt c thee chorus either. kinda crazy huh

on Sep. 2 2010 at 8:26 pm
TravisKerr BRONZE, Spring, Texas
2 articles 0 photos 5 comments

Favorite Quote:
"You will be as small as the world will make you, but only as big as you make yourself" -Mayday parade

What are the chords to this?? And strumming patterns?

Breluvsu GOLD said...
on Sep. 2 2010 at 1:41 pm
Breluvsu GOLD, LaFayette, Alabama
15 articles 0 photos 6 comments

Favorite Quote:
Live, Love, Laugh.

that was really quite GREAT!;P

on Jul. 20 2010 at 6:21 am
kasiajonas ELITE, Cracow, Other
117 articles 0 photos 11 comments

Favorite Quote:
Live like you're at the bottom even when you're at the top.

*not when... that :D

on Jul. 20 2010 at 6:21 am
kasiajonas ELITE, Cracow, Other
117 articles 0 photos 11 comments

Favorite Quote:
Live like you're at the bottom even when you're at the top.

It's cool, I even sang it. I think when I'd like to use your words when I sing in my videos someday. Would you agree? :)

on Jun. 28 2010 at 9:50 am
wildcat DIAMOND, Hopkinton, Massachusetts
64 articles 0 photos 15 comments
this was so beautiful i liked the hook and the rhyming you had going on through it! i agree with a lot of the comments keep writing!

on May. 15 2010 at 9:01 am
Tha1Chick BRONZE, Stuart, Florida
1 article 0 photos 23 comments

Favorite Quote:
You heffer! or HOLY HEFFA!

wooow...that elft me speechles! it wwas AMAZINGG <3! keep up the GREAT work. show who you are...you have alot of talent & a bright future.... mabye ull be famous hahaa(:

on Apr. 19 2010 at 7:21 pm
ZebraWithoutStripes ELITE, Blue Springs, Missouri
102 articles 8 photos 85 comments

Favorite Quote:
To make a difference in the world, you have to be different from the world.

wow!! love it!!


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