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I look into your eyes
And what do I see
Everything in the world
Except me

I look into your eyes
And see the magic of the world
I also see my best friend
Who is your special girl

I look into your eyes
And I see your soul
It’s a power too big
For even me to control

I look into your eyes
And I can see that look
On your face
That I unknowingly took

I look into your eyes
And I can see secrets
That you’ve hidden from me
And have willingly kept

I look into your eyes
And I can see the lies
That you poured down my throat
And that you showed to my eyes

I look into your eyes
And I see a smile
It’s that lovely thing
I haven’t seen in a while

I look into your eyes
And I see your heart
I tried to take it
Instead it pulled me apart

I look into your eyes
And I see the love
I just wanna ask
For some help from above

I look into your eyes
And I see your feelings
I know them all the time
And I can see that I’m stealing

I look into your eyes
I can see you entirely
I love every bit of it
You are so lively

You look into my eyes
And you see a girl
Who is afraid
To let you in her world

You look into my eyes
And you see my heart
It is still broken
From where your tore it apart

You look into my eyes
And you see my soul
It has been scarred
Because of your parole


You look in to my eyes
And you see the secrets
That you kept from me

You wonder how I got them
You wonder
Who gave me the key

Then you look into my eyes
And see the secrets
I’m hiding from you

They are written clearly
In black
And in blue

They all point in one direction
And that’s why I’m blue
They all point to the fact


That I love you




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rose said...
Apr. 13, 2011 at 1:42 pm:
tht was really good i like tht poem i think ur a really good artist!! ;D
 
Lonleydandy replied...
Apr. 15, 2011 at 5:14 pm :
Wow, thanks!
 
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RC_of_emotions said...
Apr. 4, 2011 at 4:53 pm:
I loved this. I know I'm a guy, but I can relate in different ways. Keep it up!
 
Lonleydandy replied...
Apr. 4, 2011 at 6:54 pm :
Thanks so much! It means a lot to me!
 
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Alasia B. said...
Apr. 2, 2011 at 1:22 pm:
i looove this poem, so very much
 
Lonleydandy replied...
Apr. 3, 2011 at 10:07 am :
Thank you thank you!!!
 
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xXprettybrowneyesXx said...
Mar. 24, 2011 at 2:25 pm:
i really liked the line "i look into your eyes and i see your heart, i tried to take it but it pulled me apart"   
 
Lonleydandy replied...
Mar. 24, 2011 at 8:43 pm :
Thank you! That line meant a lot to me too...hahahahahaha. [Thanks again!]
 
xXprettybrowneyesXx replied...
Apr. 15, 2011 at 2:35 pm :
yeahh , ahaha . i felt as though i could understand EXACTLY how you felt. you should check out some of my poetry and give me some feed back (:
 
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sfreidus14 said...
Mar. 24, 2011 at 12:42 pm:
such a good song!!!! :) U ROCK XD
 
Lonleydandy replied...
Mar. 24, 2011 at 8:43 pm :
Thanks so much!         
 
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pickelweasel13 said...
Mar. 23, 2011 at 12:22 am:
WOW OMG THIS IS PURE AMAZING!!!
 
Lonleydandy replied...
Mar. 24, 2011 at 8:43 pm :
Wow, thanks!
 
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Kristen J. said...
Feb. 10, 2011 at 2:54 pm:
i really liked your poem
 
Lonleydandy replied...
Feb. 12, 2011 at 4:40 pm :
Thanks!!!    
 
cutp9396 replied...
Mar. 2, 2011 at 7:24 am :
Very Very Good . Im IN LOVE
 
Lonleydandy replied...
Mar. 2, 2011 at 4:41 pm :
Thanks so much!
 
hijkmichelle replied...
Mar. 2, 2011 at 7:50 pm :
wow your really good
 
BBALL101 replied...
Mar. 17, 2011 at 1:11 pm :
i think over all it was okay
 
Lonleydandy replied...
Mar. 18, 2011 at 9:29 am :
Why, thank you!
 
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emoducks said...
Feb. 8, 2011 at 1:02 pm:
I liked this poem a lot :)
 
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