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I look into your eyes
And what do I see
Everything in the world
Except me

I look into your eyes
And see the magic of the world
I also see my best friend
Who is your special girl

I look into your eyes
And I see your soul
It’s a power too big
For even me to control

I look into your eyes
And I can see that look
On your face
That I unknowingly took

I look into your eyes
And I can see secrets
That you’ve hidden from me
And have willingly kept

I look into your eyes
And I can see the lies
That you poured down my throat
And that you showed to my eyes

I look into your eyes
And I see a smile
It’s that lovely thing
I haven’t seen in a while

I look into your eyes
And I see your heart
I tried to take it
Instead it pulled me apart

I look into your eyes
And I see the love
I just wanna ask
For some help from above

I look into your eyes
And I see your feelings
I know them all the time
And I can see that I’m stealing

I look into your eyes
I can see you entirely
I love every bit of it
You are so lively

You look into my eyes
And you see a girl
Who is afraid
To let you in her world

You look into my eyes
And you see my heart
It is still broken
From where your tore it apart

You look into my eyes
And you see my soul
It has been scarred
Because of your parole


You look in to my eyes
And you see the secrets
That you kept from me

You wonder how I got them
You wonder
Who gave me the key

Then you look into my eyes
And see the secrets
I’m hiding from you

They are written clearly
In black
And in blue

They all point in one direction
And that’s why I’m blue
They all point to the fact


That I love you




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AdalleyVictoria101 said...
May 16, 2011 at 9:18 pm:
I think I am in love with this poem <3
 
Lonleydandy replied...
May 17, 2011 at 7:07 pm :
Awww! Thanks so much!!!!
 
snickericecream replied...
May 17, 2011 at 10:52 pm :
this is amazing i wish i could write good like you :/
 
Lonleydandy replied...
May 18, 2011 at 9:43 pm :
Aww, thank you!
 
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Cassandra F. said...
May 7, 2011 at 8:29 pm:
this was so amazing and relatable:) keep up your writing!
 
Lonleydandy replied...
May 8, 2011 at 10:56 am :
Thanks, and I will. I'm working on a story right now, but it is REALLY rough. I'm not sure if I'm going to post it because of the length [99 pages on word right now]. But, thanks so much!
 
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Destiny15 said...
May 3, 2011 at 12:36 pm:
I like this alot...
 
Lonleydandy replied...
May 3, 2011 at 7:21 pm :
Thanks!          
 
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karstarr13 said...
Apr. 27, 2011 at 10:50 am:
wow! This is REALLY good! nice job :)
 
Lonleydandy replied...
Apr. 27, 2011 at 5:44 pm :
Thanks so much!!!
 
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BeautifulSkyeThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. said...
Apr. 16, 2011 at 11:58 am:

this is amazing!

 

 
Lonleydandy replied...
Apr. 17, 2011 at 12:21 pm :
Thank you thank you.
 
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LiveInTheMoment said...
Apr. 15, 2011 at 9:13 pm:
Wow, this poem is amazing! Usually, long poems get repetitive and boring, but this one captivated me from the first word to the last. Great job, and keep on writing! If you have time, please check out and comment on my poem, The Girl Inside. Thanks!!!! 8)
 
Lonleydandy replied...
Apr. 17, 2011 at 12:20 pm :
Thanks and will do!
 
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IndoPandaBearThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. said...
Apr. 15, 2011 at 3:38 pm:
this is really good!!! :D
 
Lonleydandy replied...
Apr. 15, 2011 at 5:16 pm :
Why, thank you!
 
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GraceSanchez said...
Apr. 15, 2011 at 1:21 pm:
This poem is wonderfull :) you did a very good job. it makes me think about this persons love life.
 
Lonleydandy replied...
Apr. 15, 2011 at 5:15 pm :
Aww, thank you!
 
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Antwan2011 said...
Apr. 15, 2011 at 10:48 am:
This poemi s amazing all thumbs up to the author......................
 
Lonleydandy replied...
Apr. 15, 2011 at 5:15 pm :
Thank you thank you!!!
 
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rose said...
Apr. 13, 2011 at 1:42 pm:
tht was really good i like tht poem i think ur a really good artist!! ;D
 
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