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I look into your eyes
And what do I see
Everything in the world
Except me

I look into your eyes
And see the magic of the world
I also see my best friend
Who is your special girl

I look into your eyes
And I see your soul
It’s a power too big
For even me to control

I look into your eyes
And I can see that look
On your face
That I unknowingly took

I look into your eyes
And I can see secrets
That you’ve hidden from me
And have willingly kept

I look into your eyes
And I can see the lies
That you poured down my throat
And that you showed to my eyes

I look into your eyes
And I see a smile
It’s that lovely thing
I haven’t seen in a while

I look into your eyes
And I see your heart
I tried to take it
Instead it pulled me apart

I look into your eyes
And I see the love
I just wanna ask
For some help from above

I look into your eyes
And I see your feelings
I know them all the time
And I can see that I’m stealing

I look into your eyes
I can see you entirely
I love every bit of it
You are so lively

You look into my eyes
And you see a girl
Who is afraid
To let you in her world

You look into my eyes
And you see my heart
It is still broken
From where your tore it apart

You look into my eyes
And you see my soul
It has been scarred
Because of your parole


You look in to my eyes
And you see the secrets
That you kept from me

You wonder how I got them
You wonder
Who gave me the key

Then you look into my eyes
And see the secrets
I’m hiding from you

They are written clearly
In black
And in blue

They all point in one direction
And that’s why I’m blue
They all point to the fact


That I love you




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Alex said...
Sept. 16, 2011 at 11:11 am:
Very Nice!! :)
 
Lonleydandy replied...
Sept. 16, 2011 at 9:44 pm :
Thanks!            
 
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ashzayas said...
Sept. 16, 2011 at 8:45 am:
amazing job. this is a great poem! :)
 
Lonleydandy replied...
Sept. 16, 2011 at 9:43 pm :
Thanks so much!
 
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monika08 said...
Sept. 16, 2011 at 8:35 am:
it is a beautiful song... i love it (:
 
Lonleydandy replied...
Sept. 16, 2011 at 9:43 pm :
Thank you!    
 
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poe(: said...
Sept. 13, 2011 at 10:09 am:
awsum!!!!!!!
 
Lonleydandy replied...
Sept. 13, 2011 at 5:19 pm :
Thanks!              
 
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StuieWLG said...
Aug. 25, 2011 at 6:18 pm:
Like the poem it's very good :) one thing i found strange was the transition from 4 to 3 lines in a verse yet it still worked very well and loved the one liner finish. Perfect :) 
 
Lonleydandy replied...
Aug. 25, 2011 at 7:14 pm :

Aww! Thanks soooooo much! When I wrote this, I just don't know. It kind of flowed out onto the page and I really didn't know what was going on, but apparently my mind did! I just let it be the way it wanted to!

 

Thanks sooooo much!

 
StuieWLG replied...
Aug. 26, 2011 at 1:13 pm :
your welcome :) That's good, I think when people write that way it gives a much better feel to a poem. 
 
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lexii_121 said...
Aug. 19, 2011 at 9:18 pm:
Very nice! I love this one (: I only have a few so far, hoping to post more, but take a look at minee? I'd appreciate it (:
 
Lonleydandy replied...
Aug. 25, 2011 at 7:12 pm :

Sorry it took me so long to reply to you! Thank you so much!

I'll definitely take a look at some of your stuff, if I don't get to it in a few days, be sure to remind me constantly and I'll remember! Sorry, super busy, but yeah. Just remind me!

 

Thanks again!

 
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spencyThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. said...
Aug. 11, 2011 at 7:15 pm:
y nice ans smart......luv it..plzz visit me and comment dnt forget to rate 
 
Lonleydandy replied...
Aug. 11, 2011 at 10:41 pm :

Thanks! I'll do my best to look at your work! Just remind me to do so in a comment [I get an e-mail] or I'll forget! I'm super busy and have a lot to remember!!!!

 

Thanks!

 
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NaleDawg said...
Jul. 21, 2011 at 4:28 pm:
i really like it, i also like that you said you were willing to improve. very nice. look at my work?
 
Lonleydandy replied...
Jul. 21, 2011 at 4:43 pm :
Thank you so much! And of course, I'll be sure to take a look at some of your stuff!
 
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AnnipoohThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. said...
Jul. 18, 2011 at 9:17 pm:
This is amazing
 
Lonleydandy replied...
Jul. 19, 2011 at 8:20 am :
Thanks so much!!!!
 
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Casual.dreamer said...
Jul. 12, 2011 at 12:41 pm:
This is incredible reminds me of one of my past situations. Keep writing! Look at some of my work?
 
Lonleydandy replied...
Jul. 19, 2011 at 8:21 am :
Thanks so much, and sure thing, I'll take a look at it.
 
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