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I look into your eyes
And what do I see
Everything in the world
Except me

I look into your eyes
And see the magic of the world
I also see my best friend
Who is your special girl

I look into your eyes
And I see your soul
It’s a power too big
For even me to control

I look into your eyes
And I can see that look
On your face
That I unknowingly took

I look into your eyes
And I can see secrets
That you’ve hidden from me
And have willingly kept

I look into your eyes
And I can see the lies
That you poured down my throat
And that you showed to my eyes

I look into your eyes
And I see a smile
It’s that lovely thing
I haven’t seen in a while

I look into your eyes
And I see your heart
I tried to take it
Instead it pulled me apart

I look into your eyes
And I see the love
I just wanna ask
For some help from above

I look into your eyes
And I see your feelings
I know them all the time
And I can see that I’m stealing

I look into your eyes
I can see you entirely
I love every bit of it
You are so lively

You look into my eyes
And you see a girl
Who is afraid
To let you in her world

You look into my eyes
And you see my heart
It is still broken
From where your tore it apart

You look into my eyes
And you see my soul
It has been scarred
Because of your parole


You look in to my eyes
And you see the secrets
That you kept from me

You wonder how I got them
You wonder
Who gave me the key

Then you look into my eyes
And see the secrets
I’m hiding from you

They are written clearly
In black
And in blue

They all point in one direction
And that’s why I’m blue
They all point to the fact


That I love you




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Rochelle said...
Nov. 3, 2009 at 7:38 pm:
Ah, this was so good! There's no doubt why it wouldn't be voted number one. TWICE! Keep on writing, because, HECK, I love reading your works! d:
 
Rochelle replied...
Nov. 3, 2009 at 7:39 pm :
Edit: There's no doubt why it wouldn't be voted number one. FOUR TIMES.
 
Lonleydandy replied...
Nov. 3, 2009 at 7:41 pm :
SMILES!!!!!
 
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Avalynn said...
Oct. 12, 2009 at 9:07 pm:
wow this is soooooo great, i love it! It's happened to me, i almost cried reading it.
Thank you.
 
Lonleydandy replied...
Oct. 12, 2009 at 10:08 pm :
Thank YOU! haha....thanks. I love it when I can relate to a poem..so I try to make mine relateable..thanks again
 
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Sabrina R. said...
Oct. 12, 2009 at 6:34 pm:
really cool
 
Lonleydandy replied...
Oct. 12, 2009 at 6:56 pm :
Thanks!!!!!
 
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Arlyn said...
Oct. 12, 2009 at 4:34 pm:
wow....did this realy happen to you?
I like it the different point of views make it realistic :)
 
Lonleydandy replied...
Oct. 12, 2009 at 6:57 pm :
yah, actually, It did happen to me...and still is honestly..haha...thanks for the comment
 
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0okami said...
Sept. 20, 2009 at 6:33 pm:
Wow! That poem stole the breath out of me! (Meaning I gaped at the amazing-ness for about five minutes.) :D Nice work, Becca!
-Lee
 
Lonleydandy replied...
Nov. 21, 2009 at 5:17 pm :
Hahaha, thanks!!!!!
 
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Sponda said...
Sept. 20, 2009 at 12:33 pm:
Hey Becca, Tobenator here, congrats on making it so far!!! (I'm so jealous :D) It's amazing to see how much your writing has changed since LEAP last year. Have you sent a link of you entry to Mrs. Boslow?
 
Lonleydandy replied...
Sept. 20, 2009 at 1:02 pm :
No, of course not. Do you think I should??
And thanks!
 
Sponda replied...
Sept. 20, 2009 at 1:29 pm :
Maybe, its up to you. She IS fairly responsible for giving us all that practice writing last year...
 
Sponda replied...
Sept. 20, 2009 at 1:30 pm :
Oh, and you're welcome by the way. ;DD
 
Lonleydandy replied...
Sept. 20, 2009 at 1:31 pm :
Yah, I suppose she is. My only thing was that I got all my practice from writing all my other poems over the summer. She did kind of help though...maybe I will.
 
~seabreeze :D replied...
Sept. 21, 2009 at 6:54 pm :
BECCA!!!! i love this! (adding on to sarah's comment)....you really have improved on your writing....you really gave the true meaning/emphasis of a typical relationship a shy person would have....this was really well-written....& deep....you should send a link to Mrs.Boslow!!!! :D
 
Lonleydandy replied...
Sept. 26, 2009 at 12:40 pm :
I did end up sending her a copy of the poem! She really liked it :D
 
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Alicesque said...
Sept. 20, 2009 at 12:17 pm:
Hey Becca~ This is Heidi here. I've already told you this yesterday, but I thought this was really cute, at least at the end. Pretty deep too, not cheesy, which is the downfall of many love-related poems/songs. Which is also why I listen to metal. XD Anyways, Great job on this!
 
Lonleydandy replied...
Sept. 20, 2009 at 1:03 pm :
Thanks to you Heidi Renard Reindeer!
 
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Tayy♥ said...
Sept. 18, 2009 at 5:49 am:
THis is amazing, i absolutlely love it!!
 
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