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I look into your eyes
And what do I see
Everything in the world
Except me

I look into your eyes
And see the magic of the world
I also see my best friend
Who is your special girl

I look into your eyes
And I see your soul
It’s a power too big
For even me to control

I look into your eyes
And I can see that look
On your face
That I unknowingly took

I look into your eyes
And I can see secrets
That you’ve hidden from me
And have willingly kept

I look into your eyes
And I can see the lies
That you poured down my throat
And that you showed to my eyes

I look into your eyes
And I see a smile
It’s that lovely thing
I haven’t seen in a while

I look into your eyes
And I see your heart
I tried to take it
Instead it pulled me apart

I look into your eyes
And I see the love
I just wanna ask
For some help from above

I look into your eyes
And I see your feelings
I know them all the time
And I can see that I’m stealing

I look into your eyes
I can see you entirely
I love every bit of it
You are so lively

You look into my eyes
And you see a girl
Who is afraid
To let you in her world

You look into my eyes
And you see my heart
It is still broken
From where your tore it apart

You look into my eyes
And you see my soul
It has been scarred
Because of your parole


You look in to my eyes
And you see the secrets
That you kept from me

You wonder how I got them
You wonder
Who gave me the key

Then you look into my eyes
And see the secrets
I’m hiding from you

They are written clearly
In black
And in blue

They all point in one direction
And that’s why I’m blue
They all point to the fact


That I love you




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emoducks said...
Feb. 8, 2011 at 1:02 pm:
I liked this poem a lot :)
 
Lonleydandy replied...
Feb. 8, 2011 at 8:07 pm :
Thank you!
 
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Candie said...
Feb. 6, 2011 at 11:14 am:
Wow, that was amazing!
 
Lonleydandy replied...
Feb. 6, 2011 at 12:48 pm :
Thanks so much!
 
Candie replied...
Feb. 6, 2011 at 6:09 pm :
your welcome
 
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ieshadanai said...
Feb. 3, 2011 at 8:07 pm:
Ok,thanks..
 
Lonleydandy replied...
Feb. 4, 2011 at 7:26 am :
Hope that helped!
 
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ieshadanai said...
Feb. 3, 2011 at 7:23 pm:

Hey,do you have any advice on how to make my poems better?

 

 
Lonleydandy replied...
Feb. 3, 2011 at 7:41 pm :
My only advice is to write what you love and write what you feel. Use your feelings to fuel your inspiration! If it means a lot to you, then it is usually really good to a lot of other people too!
 
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ieshadanai said...
Feb. 3, 2011 at 5:38 pm:
this poem is so cool.. i love it..
 
Lonleydandy replied...
Feb. 3, 2011 at 6:21 pm :
Thanks!              
 
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KaraJ said...
Jan. 28, 2011 at 8:18 am:
This is truley one of my favorite poems! Im tagging this as one as my favs...keep up the great work!
 
Lonleydandy replied...
Feb. 3, 2011 at 6:21 pm :
Thank you thank you thank you!!!!!
 
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MoniqueR said...
Jan. 25, 2011 at 6:23 pm:
wow amazing! i'm taging u as a fave! thatz hw mch i liked it! Read my storie Bitter hearted stranger and u'll fee the same vibe (a heartbroken <3
 
Lonleydandy replied...
Feb. 3, 2011 at 6:11 pm :

Thanks!!!!! I'll be sure to check it out!

 

 
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MoniqueR said...
Jan. 25, 2011 at 6:21 pm:
wow! amazing! i'm taging u as a fave! theres just no big word i could use, i'm just stunned! read my storie bitter hearted stranger. and u'll see the same vibe.(heartbroken heart)
 
Lonleydandy replied...
Jan. 25, 2011 at 7:23 pm :
Wow! Thanks!!!!! I'll be sure to check it out when I get a chance!!!
 
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Aspiringauhor said...
Jan. 9, 2011 at 9:39 am:
This was amazing. There is simply no other word to describe it. Is this supposed to be a song or a poem? :)
 
Lonleydandy replied...
Jan. 9, 2011 at 11:26 am :
Thank you! To answer your question: wellllllllllllllllllllllll............it was SUPPOSED to be a song, but it is really repetative and annoying to sing....so I suppose you could classify it as a poem!
 
Aspiringauhor replied...
Jan. 9, 2011 at 11:30 am :
Haha yeah I guess that's true. I wrote a song but they haven't put it on here yet... Why is it taking so long? :)
 
Lonleydandy replied...
Jan. 9, 2011 at 11:40 am :
I don't really know. I remember my first piece that I ever submitted took maybe a week, and then as I started submittting stuff, I realized that it took FOREVER [the longest one took up to a month and a half].
 
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