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O – Oh I'm
Spinning, Spinning, Spinning
My head
Is reeling

Ever since I saw your face
My life has been
Full
Of grace

Everything you do
Every step you take
Shapes me
Molds Me
Perfects Me

O - Oh
So now I'm
Spinning, spinning, spinning
My head is reeling
O - Oh
Can't describe this feeling
You're Oh You're
So wonderful

And now......

I'm Spinning
My head
My head is
Reeling




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perfected_11 said...
May 8, 2010 at 11:29 am:
Lovin these lyrics!!!!!!
 
writer24/7/365 replied...
May 9, 2010 at 7:52 am :
Thanks!!!!!!!
 
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writer24/7/365 said...
Sept. 19, 2009 at 4:00 pm:
hahahahahahahahahahaha! thanks!
 
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aubrey63 said...
Sept. 19, 2009 at 3:34 pm:
HOLY CRUD THIS IS AWESOME!!!!!!!!!!
 
writer24/7/365 replied...
May 8, 2010 at 11:38 am :
Thanks :D You really think so?
 
aub13zzz replied...
May 8, 2010 at 12:00 pm :
Yeaaa I rly do I think its amazing!!!
 
writer24/7/365 replied...
May 8, 2010 at 12:02 pm :
Thanks! It's one of the first song-ish poems I've written (I've done some before but I didn't write them down so I forgot them!
 
writer24/7/365 replied...
May 8, 2010 at 12:04 pm :
I've read your pieces and they rock! We should vote for each other's stuff and maybe they'll be popular on the site!
 
aub13zzz replied...
May 8, 2010 at 9:10 pm :

to ur 1st comment -- i know what u mean ill come up w/ something rly good and i always forget it lol!

to ur 2nd comment -- thanks! and that's a good idea! ill look @ urs and read/rate them! :D

 
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