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June 2, 2009
By Jami Huffman BRONZE, Hartford, Michigan
Jami Huffman BRONZE, Hartford, Michigan
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[Chorus]
I was suppose to forget you
After you said those faithful words
That without you my life would be normal
But now you’re all I can remember.

It all started one cold rainy morning
Not seeming any different from the rest
Went through my daily routine
And I left unseen with no one in the house but me.
From class to class up until lunch
Sitting among friends laughing along
Then a sparkle caught my eye. It was you
I couldn’t bring myself to look away
Until you noticed me

[Chorus]
I was suppose to forget you
After you said those faithful words
That without you my life would be normal
But now you’re all I can remember.

Our eyes locked but only for a moment
Your face imprinted in my mind
I forced myself to look away
With fear of what you might find
Another glance every now and again
But then I had to go
I saw you again, sooner than I thought
My mind is clouded, my thoughts unclear
What started off as nothing turned into so much more
Everything was perfect ‘til that day
The day you left me shattered and bruised

[Chorus]
I was suppose to forget you
After you said those faithful words
That without you my life would be normal
But now you’re all I can remember.

Standing in the woods on that dark cloudy day.
You said it would be better if you left.
I heard your heart break
I felt the tears that ran down your cheek
You told me to act like you never existed
But the sound of your name
Rips holes in my chest
I never expected to see you again
I know that I still love you with every ounce of my being
But you’re perfect and I’m anything but.
“I’m sorry” was the last words you said before you left.

[Chorus]
I was suppose to forget you
After you said those faithful words
That without you my life would be normal
But now you’re all I can remember.

My world came crashing down
My breathe was taken
I couldn’t say anything
Left alone on the forest floor
Never to be mended again

[Chorus]
I was suppose to forget you
After you said those faithful words
That without you my life would be normal
But now you’re all I can remember.


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Sevanna BRONZE said...
on Apr. 30 2010 at 2:53 pm
Sevanna BRONZE, Khartoum, Other
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Favorite Quote:
Life isn't about the number of breaths we take. It's about the moments that take our breath away.

this is like new moon, yeah? when edward leaves bella.

on Apr. 18 2010 at 6:52 pm
ChocolateEyes07 BRONZE, Boise, Idaho
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Favorite Quote:
Don't tell me the sky is the limit when there are footprints on the moon

this reminded me of my previous relationship.. i feel like i know exactly what ur going thru... however this song is REALLY good (:

on Mar. 17 2010 at 1:21 am
baumshell DIAMOND, Burbank, California
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Favorite Quote:
"I was thinking how nothing lasts and what a shame that is."-Benjamin Button

yea i thought new moon

on Feb. 1 2010 at 10:16 am
This reminds us of New moon. (:

Laugh@Life said...
on Feb. 1 2010 at 9:36 am
Laugh@Life, Littleton, Colorado
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Hey me too! It really should be part of New Moon! So cool!

Laugh@Life said...
on Feb. 1 2010 at 9:36 am
Laugh@Life, Littleton, Colorado
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Beautiful I wish I knew what it sounded like! You really out did your self!

LesleyChow said...
on Feb. 1 2010 at 9:31 am
This was really funny. You really belted out your heart. When I read it sounded like you sang it to me in my dreams.

on Sep. 15 2009 at 10:54 am
TwilightXisXlove1901 BRONZE, Northglenn, Colorado
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WOW that was amazing I think as soon as I read it I automatically thought of NEW MOON!!!! you should totallly try to sumbit that song to the people who put songs on the soundtrack! it's perfect for the movie and the book.

on Sep. 13 2009 at 11:17 am
AngelForeverBleedingLove DIAMOND, Frederic, Wisconsin
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Favorite Quote:
You say you don't remember,
But I will never forget

I agree! it sounds like something that would be beautiful an a soundtrack, and New Moon is the perfect choice!

Pinky BRONZE said...
on Sep. 10 2009 at 4:53 pm
Pinky BRONZE, Hopkinsville, Kentucky
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This is great. I think they should put this in the New Moon soundtrack!!! That would be utterly amazing.

lil c 23 said...
on Sep. 9 2009 at 11:35 am
this is a really good song

Victoriaa said...
on Sep. 5 2009 at 8:50 pm
Victoriaa, Houston, Texas
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WOW! Love this, honestly--the first thing I thought after reading this was "TWILIGHT!!" LOL This is great(;

Gema:) BRONZE said...
on Jun. 10 2009 at 2:00 pm
Gema:) BRONZE, South Paris, Maine
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This is a beautiful song.

I really hope you keep writing.

Look at my work if you'd like(:




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