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[Chorus]
I was suppose to forget you
After you said those faithful words
That without you my life would be normal
But now you’re all I can remember.

It all started one cold rainy morning
Not seeming any different from the rest
Went through my daily routine
And I left unseen with no one in the house but me.
From class to class up until lunch
Sitting among friends laughing along
Then a sparkle caught my eye. It was you
I couldn’t bring myself to look away
Until you noticed me

[Chorus]
I was suppose to forget you
After you said those faithful words
That without you my life would be normal
But now you’re all I can remember.

Our eyes locked but only for a moment
Your face imprinted in my mind
I forced myself to look away
With fear of what you might find
Another glance every now and again
But then I had to go
I saw you again, sooner than I thought
My mind is clouded, my thoughts unclear
What started off as nothing turned into so much more
Everything was perfect ‘til that day
The day you left me shattered and bruised

[Chorus]
I was suppose to forget you
After you said those faithful words
That without you my life would be normal
But now you’re all I can remember.

Standing in the woods on that dark cloudy day.
You said it would be better if you left.
I heard your heart break
I felt the tears that ran down your cheek
You told me to act like you never existed
But the sound of your name
Rips holes in my chest
I never expected to see you again
I know that I still love you with every ounce of my being
But you’re perfect and I’m anything but.
“I’m sorry” was the last words you said before you left.

[Chorus]
I was suppose to forget you
After you said those faithful words
That without you my life would be normal
But now you’re all I can remember.

My world came crashing down
My breathe was taken
I couldn’t say anything
Left alone on the forest floor
Never to be mended again

[Chorus]
I was suppose to forget you
After you said those faithful words
That without you my life would be normal
But now you’re all I can remember.




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HinataHyuga said...
Feb. 19, 2012 at 6:02 pm:
How cute:)
 
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reader123 said...
Dec. 6, 2011 at 10:34 am:
evrything about that song IS TWILIGHT!!:)  Good job on it! lol
 
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LazyDaisyLovesYou said...
Aug. 27, 2011 at 9:52 pm:
good job! if your looking for a title it could be "I was supposed to forget you" or "(You're) All I can remember"
 
LazyDaisyLovesYou replied...
Aug. 27, 2011 at 9:55 pm :
i forgot to say even though everyone's already saying this, it TOTALLY reminded me of Twilight. mostly the "Standing in the woods on that dark cloudy day" verse.
 
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luvkittehz8P This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Aug. 5, 2011 at 9:06 pm:
awesome. but this is definately inspired by the Twilight series....
 
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chrissie_star said...
Jul. 19, 2011 at 2:31 pm:
omg!! totally can relate to it!!
 
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Tysondramafreak said...
Jul. 14, 2011 at 4:40 pm:
I read this & it reminded me of somthing that happend 2 me....GREAT SONG!!!
 
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kaykaybeck said...
Mar. 26, 2011 at 8:41 pm:
It left me speechless. So good I love it. (:
 
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Sallytheseal said...
Jan. 19, 2011 at 1:22 pm:
yeah it is sooooooooooo amazing I am like crying its so good
 
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nightgirl13 said...
Nov. 19, 2010 at 4:19 pm:
did u write it after newmoon
 
reader123 replied...
Dec. 6, 2011 at 10:35 am :
^like^haha:)
 
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poetic_natural said...
Nov. 14, 2010 at 2:20 pm:
this reminds me of the scene in new moon where edward leaves bella. she lays on the forest floor, its similair to this song
 
wasauskyx replied...
May 9, 2011 at 6:55 am :
That's exactly what I was thinking of but it seems too much to be coincidential so it must be...
 
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Jenna B. said...
Sept. 9, 2010 at 10:55 pm:
this really illuminates the understanding of starting and ending. very good(:
 
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-DreamForever- said...
Aug. 18, 2010 at 6:04 pm:
This hit too close to home reminding me of my recent breakup. It is really good though. 
 
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Sevanna said...
Apr. 30, 2010 at 2:53 pm:
this is like new moon, yeah? when edward leaves bella.
 
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ChocolateEyes07 said...
Apr. 18, 2010 at 6:52 pm:
this reminded me of my previous relationship.. i feel like i know exactly what ur going thru... however this song is REALLY good (:
 
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buxbaum said...
Mar. 17, 2010 at 1:21 am:
yea i thought new moon
 
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rianna&maddie(: said...
Feb. 1, 2010 at 10:16 am:
This reminds us of New moon. (:
 
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Samantha M. said...
Feb. 1, 2010 at 9:36 am:
Beautiful I wish I knew what it sounded like! You really out did your self!
 
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